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Re: Intoxicated by you
Wesh! Professor JadeLotus here to review your poem. Your title caught my attention and I read it earlier. Blah, blah, blah, here we are! I'll be going through this line-by-line. ...
Jun 2, 2019 -
Re: Hello my name is...
Wesh! Jade her to review you. Let's just get to it, then! I really love your randomosity and lighthearted humorous poem. I think the flow could be fixed, and there ...
Jun 2, 2019 -
Re: i n c a s e w e d o n t e x i s t
Wesh! I'm just going to give a quick review. Ok, let's go. Fix the spelling mistakes. It polishes it up and makes it even better! Watch the flow. Watch the ...
Jun 1, 2019 -
Re: Keep It Cool
Wesh! Professor Jade here to review another poem by you! Let's just get to it, then. :) (WARNING: This is going to be quick. I don't know how much help ...
Jun 1, 2019 -
Re: Our Love Is So Complicated
Wesh! It's Jade here to review another poem! I'm just going to give my overall thoughts so here we go. PROS: This is sssoooo relatable and I congratulate you on ...
Jun 1, 2019 -
Re: That Boy
Wesh! It's Jade here to review this. I know it's old but I still wanted to. Let's just start. That boy- Brought a boy home one day. Mamma said " ...
May 28, 2019 -
Re: Exploring
Wesh! Professor Jade here to review your poem. The title reminded me of Dora the Explorer for some reason, but I thought I'd check it out. Let's just get to ...
May 28, 2019 -
Re: Snickers
Wesh! JadeLotus here to review a poem. Let's just get to it. I like to eat chocolate that is solid. I bite into my Snickers, tasting nothing bitter. The flow ...
May 28, 2019 -
Re: My Perfect Pet
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a review. I remember your lighthearted style and let me say.... this is relatable (for me, a very sweet-toothed person, at least)! Let's begin. My ...
May 28, 2019 -
Re: heartache (song/ballard)
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a quick review. This is a very relatable poem. Here is my pro and con list. PROS: Flow and rhyme scheme is good. I could ...
May 28, 2019 -
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May 28, 2019
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a review. I know this isn't a story anymore but I'm in desperate need of points and I'm SOooo close to my next review star- ... -
Re: Elizabeth (#1)
This was a great poem and I loved the conversation flow. This was sweet, to the point, and the description was great! I can't see any grammar or spelling mistakes ...
May 28, 2019 -
Re: Happy Memorial Day: A Remembrance Poem
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a review. Let's just get to it. Remember the men who risked their lives for ours. Embrace the sacrifice they made for this country. May ...
May 28, 2019 -
Re: Opps, I Added too much Pepper
Wesh! I'm back to review another poem. So, here we are. "Tears roll down my cheeks, things I've hidden for weeks," Ok, so the first two lines made me think ...
May 28, 2019 -
Re: I Would Never Crush Him!
Wesh! Professor Jade here for a review. Let's just get to it then.... OOHHH What a cute start to the poem. Maybe add an exclamation to the end to make ...
May 28, 2019