Wesh! It's Jade here to review another poem!
I'm just going to give my overall thoughts so here we go.
PROS:
This is sssoooo relatable and I congratulate you on getting your words onto paper.
I love how you ended it.
It's deep and raw, to be honest!
CONS:
Watch the flow and the syllable count of the stanzas.
Maybe add metaphors to tie it in??
OVERALL:
Greatr work! I like our poem style and I can't wait to see more by you soon.
Have a great day and I hope this helped
-JadeLotus-
Points: 1578
Reviews: 232
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