LUNARGIRL

Wow, this is amazing! You wording is so powerful, and you convey so much through your words. Personally This brings back memories of all the things that have happened in ...

Wow, this was a beautiful poem. You wrote the poem so elegantly and you describe the feeling of having a best friend who feels the same way about you as ...

Hi, I really liked reading your poem even, it was very interesting. I loved how you described the girl, that she her name was untold. To me it is like ...

Hi, really nice job on your poem. I really liked how two people could form a relationship without even having to talk. Normally this is not how a relationship is ...

Great job! I really liked how you conveyed this piece. That life has ups and downs, good times and bad times, but good things are still possible when this happens. ...

I love this poem, you use great description and imagery. I felt like this line, "You made me smile, even laugh", and "Of madness and joy and agonizing tears" took ...

I love all the imagery you use throughout the poem, like at this part. "I would hear the songs of content passing through my ears; And everytime I would hear ...

Hi, LUNARGIRL here with a review. 1. In the beginning when you say, "They were best friends and they were never separated until one day a big gust of wind ...

I loved this poem, it was so beautiful! I loved how much description you used, how you describe all the different flower and how they were choking you. I really ...

First off, really nice job on the poem. I enjoyed the idea that the speaker has no idea about their past. That they are only able to describe their memories ...

Really good job on the poem. You use great structure, and you do a great job conveying what both of the characters feel for each other. My favorite part is ...

Wow, this was a gorgeous poem. This truly captures the love a mother has for her unborn child, and how she can't wait to meet him or her even though ...

Wow, really good job on the poem. You use great description and you have such a unique way of describing the changing of the seasons to winter. You had a ...

Wow, great job you put so much thought, imagery, and description into it, it was amazing. When I looked at the title and clicked on it I was like I ...

LUNARGIRL here with a review, and here with a belated welcome to YWS. Nice job on the poem I really enjoyed it. The thing is with potery you don't really ...