LUNARGIRL

Great job on the poem! I really liked your use of description like at this part for example. "We are shards, of amethyst & jade". This line painted such a ...

I absolutely loved this poem!😃 It like the moon is a person in this poem, with human features and feelings. This makes the poem very entertaining and more interesting to ...

This was a very interesting poem. I haven't read anything quite like this before, in a good way. I enjoyed you use of repetition throughout the poem. Sometimes people will ...

Great poem! I enjoyed the way how you expressed a different way of love in the poem. It really places into the saying that actions speak louder than words. That ...

Wow, great job on the poem! You did a great job on the rhyming, but in some places it was inconsistent. I really enjoyed the general idea of the poem, ...

Hey, good job on the poem! You use a lot of repetition which was great when you used words like silence and night, but sometimes you overused words like moonlight. ...

Great poem! I love how descriptive it and your word choice tie the poem beautiful together. The questions of potential, freedom, morality, destiny, and society, are questions that every person ...

Nice job on the poem! I really liked how the person feels like they are alone in the world, that they feel like they are stuck with nowhere to go. ...

This is an amazing poem! The poem is so emotional and I love the flow of the poem. This is also a great theme, the illusion of time. Everyone thinks ...

Great job on the poem! I loved your use of repetition, it made the poem more powerful. I also really liked how you made it into a narrative in a ...

Wow, this is a beautiful poem! You imagery is was great and I really liked the flow of the poem. One thing I have to say is that I feel ...

Wow, this is an amazing poem! The feeling is horrible when you just want to talk to a friend that you haven't seen in a while. But they never rely ...

This was a very beautiful poem. I loved the imagery you used and your word choice makes the poem so powerful. I like the carefree ending, how the person makes ...

Nice job! This is a very relatable poem for many writers. It was so hilarious, my eyes were glued to it from the very beginning. I really enjoyed the ending ...

Wow, this was a really beautiful poem and your imagery was so beautiful and descriptive. You described not only how the sunset looked, but what the viewer thinks of it. ...