KnightTeen

This was very good, I loved it. And in truth, I find nothing wrong with this. Not a single grammar or spelling mistake that I can see. Indeed, it is ...

Wow. There really is nothing to say about this other than that it was amazing. But, and this is something that is more about personal choice than any real issue ...

Hey, HT here reviewing. Just like to say first of all that this was very well written. That being said, in my personal opinion the title does not suit the ...

Hey, HT here to review. I loved your ending, just a beginning FYI. And yay! An author who rhymes. (To those of you who don't, I love you to. I ...

Hey, HT here to review. Let me just say, finally someone who has a set rhyme pattern. No offense is meant to those of you who do not do rhyme ...

Hey, HT here to review. First of all let me say that I enjoyed this poem. I thought that it was well-written and had very good word flow to it, ...

This was very good and well written. You stayed on the same topic throughout the work, and for this I commend you because time and again I encounter writers whose ...

This was amazing. I'm going to analyze this in parts, and then review the poem as a whole. Part 1: Falling. I'm not entirely sure if the title for this ...

I enjoyed reading this. Here are some suggestions that I believe would make this work better. (n): an emotional disorder in which a large quantity of food is followed by ...

This song/work of lyrical literature is in actuality, quite good. However, I did spot some rather obvious grammatical errors that stunted the work. Anyone who has had a poetical work ...

Oh. Wow. Remind me to never give you caffeine. Just a few things that I would like to point out. Typically in poetry, the first letter of every line is ...

Incredible. Absolutely incredible. You managed to touch on a topic that many teens feel but rarely discuss. I know that I myself have felt this way many times. One fold ...

This is a surprisingly accurate take on the one thing that has troubled everyone here at some point it their literary writing career. (And to anyone who is reading this ...

This is very good. But it is my personal opinion that the title does not suite the content of the poetical (or is it lyrical? I can never truly tell ...

This is really good. However, I believe that you should label your verses as well as the chorus. And I agree with Blackwood, it does seem to be rather short. ...