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Re: The Dance of the Four Seasons
Hi there. KingQueenKnave here, an honest reviewer. I have come to review your poem, a take on the Four Seasons by Vivaldi. Perhaps it's worth mentioning that, to fully read ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: The Best Thing Ever
Hello there. KingQueenKnave here, an honest reviewer. It's time to sit down and read your poem, which is entitled The Best Thing Ever. The tone of the poem is obviously ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: 4:52 pm, January 22, 2016. Time of Death....
Hello there. KingQueenKnave here, an honest reviewer. I think it's in due course to take everything into account, for- as I can tell- this poem was written during the process ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: Please, My Dear
Hello there. KingQueenKnave here, an honest reviewer. I have arrived to offer my opinion on this poem, which still remains under-reviewed for whatever reason. What I liked about this poem ...
Jan 23, 2016 -
Re: Want That Lisa Smile again....
Hello there. I am KingQueenKnave. I have come to review your poem. It is a good poem, but it definitely could use improving. As a starting point, I like the ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: Drugs and Love Don't Mix
Hello there. KingQueenKnave here, hopefully an honest reviewer, and I shall be all that and more about your short piece. Well, as a starting point, your title brings forth a ...
Jan 3, 2016 -
Re: Drip, Drop
Hello there. KingQueenKnave here, hopefully the most honest YWS reviewer. I reviewed your poem Poems Are Simple, which was too simple for its own good in my opinion. However, as ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: Poems are Simple
Hello there. I am KingQueenKnave, hopefully the most honest reviewer on YWS- without being a smug prat, of course. However, with the risk of sounding like one, I had a ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
My opinion appears somewhat irrelevant, given that this #1 on the literary spotlight of all time. Of course, this is a matter of opinion, even if the majority appraise it. ...
Dec 27, 2015 -
Re: NYC
Hello there. First of all, welcome to YWS. It is nice to have another on board. If you need any advice or have questions about the review I am about ...
Dec 26, 2015 -
Re: Those Three Words
A poem of deception, though by the end of the third stanza I began to see the trick. I did like it, though, and honestly expected "I love you" to ...
Dec 26, 2015 -
Re: Ace Exists
I admire the attempts at channeling an inner Jean-Paul Sartre, knee-deep in French existential comedy and the questions without answers, but admiration for the attempts doesn't translate quite so well
Dec 26, 2015 -
Re: Suffer Not
Hi. KingQueenKnave here, YWS' most honest reviewer. I have come to take a look at your poem, which- judging by the urgent all caps of the title- promises drama and ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: the path of glass
I personally believe this work possesses a zen-like genius. Beneath the unintentionally poor grammar and the rather open-ended storyline, there is an endearing quality to it. There is something about ...
Nov 22, 2015 -
Re: Flower Petals
Heartbreak is a prevalent theme in this short poem of yours. Its three stanzas, separated by two loads of asterick trios, evoke a feeling of want- perceived as a need- ...
Nov 22, 2015
