Killyouwithwords

Hey! I'm Killyouwithwords and I'm going to review your poem. First off, I'd like to say that I liked your poem, and that you did a very good job! I ...

This was an awesome poem, and I was literally inching closer to my screen to read it! Amazing imagery and touching emotion...I wasn't expecting how good it would be. The ...

Wow, this a really good poem...and quite unusual. I love that you're writing about a pen. Kind of ironic isn't it? It was smooth and well written with very little ...

Wow, great job. I love how you compare yourself to a machine, and you do it skillfully I must add. The imagery is awesome, and you give a clear picture ...

This is a very good poem, but I don't have much to say on it because Blackwood covered most of the basics. I love the words you used, and the ...

Very well done. I like how original it was, and the wording was great. It added life to the poem, whereas your imagery, unfortunately, failed to do that You should ...

This is perfect for a website specially made for youths. It paints our coming of age in a hopeful, yet almost nerve wracking light. Great Job!! You used wonderful imagery ...

Hi, this is killyouwithwords here to review your poem! I want to start of on a positive note, and that's that I love the overall poem and I thought yo ...

Wow, this is fabulous ( and that's usually not a word I would use). There was beautiful imagery and delicate wording. I loved how you repeated some of the words, ...

This is a sweet poem about hope and perseverance, you are obviously very talented. However, it didn't flow very well and had little effect one. You need to deepen its ...

You already said that it needed to be edited so I won't comment on that. The poem lacked emotion in the middle though, you need to add more imagery and ...

Great poem, but I agree with nightyowl that it sounds a bit clichè. It could use some editing as well, some lines sound as if you were trying to say ...

Wow, this touched me deeply, as I am very religious and love music that makes me love my Heavenly Father even more. Wonderfully done, and very sincere. But unfortunately this ...

Beautiful imagery, and amazing symbolism. This was the first poem I read on this sight, and probably the reason I joined!! Though it took me a couple times to catch ...

Wow, I'm almost speechless. I was deeply touched by your honesty and emotion. It's hard escaping the type of pain and addiction that drugs create, and you emphasized that point ...