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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Circus Goodbye

    Nice poem written by the author. "I can’t remember last time things were fine You actin’ like lovin’ hard was a crime" Once that strong bond of love they had ...

    Oct 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: i wish we could go to the stars instead of being defined by them

    Nice poem written by the author. Ok so the concept of star knowledge with a pinch of love is really eye catchy and awesome. "our stars don’t collide, they only ...

    Oct 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Figure

    Nice story written by the author. First things first- The character explanation is clear and well-written but, the story got a bit confusing from the point "It was jet black ...

    Sep 20, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Final Ritual

    I am very sorry to hear about your friend. I know the pain, I have felt this before. Last year my grandfather from my maternal side died, I was sitting ...

    Sep 18, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Castle of Queerosity: Summary

    Nice, short but interesting summary written by the author. "Noroi Sarowmon has always been in a black box. He couldn’t see the world nor color. In his black box, he ...

    Sep 16, 2024
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: You remind me (Of October): A Stalkers poem.

    Nice poem written by the author. A stalker's point of view is a whole new thing (silly me never thought about something this cool). "Your laugh reminds me, It's like ...

    Sep 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: curse of the timezones

    Nice poem written by the author. First of all this poem is very funny :) "im always a day ahead so remember if there is race, i will win. Without ...

    Sep 12, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Joshua-Midnight Witch

    Nice story written by the author. First things first: This is a nice story, but I still think there can be a few improvements. You can make the story a ...

    Sep 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: 걸어간다 - Walking

    Nice poem written by the author. First of all this poem is quite relatable (at least for me it is). "Same goes for you You’re tired as well, aren’t you ...

    Sep 12, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Where did Jude go off to?

    Nice story written by the author. I don't read many stories, usually its me reading poems, but the title of this story, the question this title carries caught my eye. ...

    Sep 10, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: ******

    Nice poem written by the author. This poem is full of messages the author wants to convey to her/his mother from a long time. Its a mother's duty to look ...

    Sep 5, 2024
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, General Re: First Love

    I have no words. You have expressed these emotions so beautifully, Its wonderful in simple words. "You were the closest friend I had, the one I loved the most. Who ...

    Sep 5, 2024
  • Other » General, General Re: Or maybe

    As I can understand from this poem: "Love has one language, Love has no age. You fall in love with the person not the gender, What is your question my ...

    Sep 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Art? Art. Spider.

    Nice poem written by the author. "Force my skin to recede and make space for more space Space for more meaning, and emotion, and grace" The spiders are also a ...

    Aug 31, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Sticks and Stones

    Nice poem written by the author. "These words can become so awful That life seems unworth living… That maybe... maybe it could all be solved... With a gun or a ...

    Aug 29, 2024


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