Justlittleoleme

Okay, I really like the idea of this poem. Being able to read something so scrambled is really neat :) and the meaning is something worth deciphering. Over all a ...

Very cute, very true, very charming little poem. I really enjoyed reading it to say the least. My favorite like is "Like an inverted simple dimple" just because it's a ...

This is a fine little bit of writing but it has a few problems. For one, your word use is a little awkward, for example: "will my mind remember all ...

Hi there, Cool poem, strong message. I imagine a world where the all the laws and controlling forces that we once hated are gone and we realize how much we ...

Alright, let me start by saying, WOOT! I love prision/escape style stories. You grabbed my attention from the very beginning and kept till the very end, I was reading just ...

This is a nice cool little poem with a pleasant rhythm and rhyme coupled with an all too true meaning, but who is the the metaphorical "one" that avoids imagination? ...

This is lovely, and awesome. I love the way the words flowed and matched but most of all I loved the message. It is a rare treat when beautiful verse ...

I truly enjoyed this. It was short, sweet and perfectly honest which was what I enjoyed most. The emotion here is not sweet and sally and I find nothing off ...

This was very lovely. The story was simply beautiful and the ralationship between Jane and Zane was real. This wasn't some soppy love story it had meat to it and ...

This was crazy, but in a good way. ;) I feel like this belongs to bigger story or novel somehow because just alone it is little disembodied. Certainly not in ...

I am afraid that I have only a few tips on improving this poem. To start off I was simply blown away by the beauty of it. It was more ...

Ahhhh, I loved this :3 I have absolutely no nitpicks.Although your symbolism did get a little lost about the middle(especially with the whole "nurses fingers" bit) the rest of the ...

XD Hey Lornydoo, This poem was in three words, very very good! The first line for example was Awesome! "I loved more than sun and moon, I hoped that you ...

:D I really liked this...though I do find a horror of snails to be a little silly. I my self always felt a little sorry for them. I mean its ...

Alright, so this story has some potential. I actually started to like the main characters and this Dimitri fellow is interesting. I have no clue about the white horse at ...