Juniper

Bonjour, Aley! June here. I appreciate this poem for its well thought out rhyme scheme. I'm a little unsure of how I feel towards it on the whole, though, because ...

Hey there, Snoweary! I think this is adorable; it's simple and brief, so there's not much to pick at here. For the most part, it flows well until it gets ...

Hey there, it's been quite a while since I've read anything of yours, It's quite hard to not appreciate the simplicity of this poem. It's clean, the words are simple, ...

Hey there! I concur with the previous reviewers when they say that this was cute; it was a rather feel-good poem and it's always nice to read one of those. ...

Hey there, Flower, I'm a big fan of six-word stories and poems because I always find it so great to see what people come up with when they're so restricted. ...

Hey there, Panda! Thewritersdream has already pointed out some important grammatical corrections that you should be mindful of; proper spelling and grammar helps ensure your audience has a smoother re

Hey there, I'm June, I'm delicate about reviewing poems about sensitive topics, so I'll start this off by saying if you ever need someone to talk to for anything, reach ...

Hey there, Roxy, This topic of the poem is unsettling enough to move your audience either into submission or rebellion, both of which could do favors for the likability of ...

Hey Story Weaver, I like this poem -- the opening is decent. It leads us into a story with an air of expectation for something to unfold before us. I ...

Hey there, Jay, I'm June, I feel like this poem has a lot of potential to be something bigger than it is currently. I like the use of nature in ...

Hey there, Aaron, To be completely honest, I don't think rhyme is doing you favors in this poem. I feel from this that you probably have a significant message to ...

Hey, Hamza, June here, I'm not entirely sure if this was meant to be a strictly humorous piece or an examination of a tool we rely on in our daily ...

Hey there, Skull Candi, I'm June I think that there is potential in this poem, but I think it could use a tiny bit of tweaking. Unless there's an explicit ...

Hey there, I love the idea behind this poem. I love its delicacy, and I love the happy, yet somber tone that flowers contribute to its atmosphere, but its delivery ...

Hi, Dannie! I like this a lot. It reminded me of a book titled Steal Like an Artist by Austin Kleon (I recommend picking up a copy if you haven't ...