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Re: Broken Leash
Solvy, Solvy, Solvy. Juniper, at your service, I've got to be honest: I'm a little delicate about reviewing your poems because I know that English isn't your first language and ...
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Re: You Let Me Fall
Hi, Layal, I'm Juniparrr, I'm a little tossed up about this poem. I want to sympathize with you because it sounds like you've been through something awful, hence why you're ...
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Re: ugly is ugly
Hi Mistie! Juniparre here, All I can think of as I read this poem is why? Why is ugly beautiful, and why is despair here, and why is truth hitting ...
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Re: A New Road
Howdy hey, Aonar, Juniper here, Ooh, a poem about deja vu? I like the idea you're working with here, but your presentation of it is something that could stand to ...
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Re: A Man of Thoughts
Hey there, Nicholas! I'm June, I'm an avid appreciator of sonnets, but I can't write them myself because they're incredibly challenging for me, so I applaud your efforts. I also ...
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Re: Deathbed Prayer
Hoot, hoot, niteowl, June here, My grandmother used to write her prayers into poetry because she believed that the Lord would feel more inclined to listen to something that at ...
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Re: The Minstrel's Song
Hi darkangel, I'm June, I love the way you use rhyme in this poem. It's effortless and organized and what you are trying to say is neither obstructed or underminded ...
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Re: There is a ship
Howdy hey, Bubbly bubbles, I'm June, You have a very, very good command of rhyme here, and I'm impressed. Your lines seem to come along for the ride, rather than ...
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Re: Bridging the Barrier
Bonjour, barefootrunner, June here, I absolutely adore your way of telling a story here; it's a gradual unfolding, slowly, and then all at once, and I have nothing but love ...
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Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either
Hi there, Indie! I'm June! I think this poem is well-deserving of the feature it's received, and I'm not sure why it took me so long to get around to ...
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Re: Countdown.
Hey Blackwood, I'm June, I'm not going to waste time highlighting the nitpicks since you've gotten a few wonderful reviews preceding mine; I'll just go about this in the general ...
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Re: Hallow
Hey there, Kat, I'm not sure about this-- do you mean to say hallow, as in sacred/highly valued, or hollow, as in empty, high and dry? Nevertheless, I like this ...
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Re: Life
Hi, Umaima, I'm June, You have a bit of creative ideas inside of this poem, which is excellent. I think there are a few things that could stand to be ...
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Re: Deception
Hi Kelsey, I'm June, I liked how short this poem was, because it didn't waste time trying to be cryptic or overly creative with images. Like the previous reviewer mentioned, ...
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Re: Loss of a Snide Conscience
Hi Rage, June here, I like this poem a lot because I can relate. I don't like the constant referral to of the dictator as an "it" because it's awfully ...
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