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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Broken Leash

    Solvy, Solvy, Solvy. Juniper, at your service, I've got to be honest: I'm a little delicate about reviewing your poems because I know that English isn't your first language and ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: You Let Me Fall

    Hi, Layal, I'm Juniparrr, I'm a little tossed up about this poem. I want to sympathize with you because it sounds like you've been through something awful, hence why you're ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: ugly is ugly

    Hi Mistie! Juniparre here, All I can think of as I read this poem is why? Why is ugly beautiful, and why is despair here, and why is truth hitting ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: A New Road

    Howdy hey, Aonar, Juniper here, Ooh, a poem about deja vu? I like the idea you're working with here, but your presentation of it is something that could stand to ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: A Man of Thoughts

    Hey there, Nicholas! I'm June, I'm an avid appreciator of sonnets, but I can't write them myself because they're incredibly challenging for me, so I applaud your efforts. I also ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Deathbed Prayer

    Hoot, hoot, niteowl, June here, My grandmother used to write her prayers into poetry because she believed that the Lord would feel more inclined to listen to something that at ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Minstrel's Song

    Hi darkangel, I'm June, I love the way you use rhyme in this poem. It's effortless and organized and what you are trying to say is neither obstructed or underminded ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: There is a ship

    Howdy hey, Bubbly bubbles, I'm June, You have a very, very good command of rhyme here, and I'm impressed. Your lines seem to come along for the ride, rather than ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Bridging the Barrier

    Bonjour, barefootrunner, June here, I absolutely adore your way of telling a story here; it's a gradual unfolding, slowly, and then all at once, and I have nothing but love ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either

    Hi there, Indie! I'm June! I think this poem is well-deserving of the feature it's received, and I'm not sure why it took me so long to get around to ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Countdown.

    Hey Blackwood, I'm June, I'm not going to waste time highlighting the nitpicks since you've gotten a few wonderful reviews preceding mine; I'll just go about this in the general ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Romantic Re: Hallow

    Hey there, Kat, I'm not sure about this-- do you mean to say hallow, as in sacred/highly valued, or hollow, as in empty, high and dry? Nevertheless, I like this ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Life

    Hi, Umaima, I'm June, You have a bit of creative ideas inside of this poem, which is excellent. I think there are a few things that could stand to be ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Deception

    Hi Kelsey, I'm June, I liked how short this poem was, because it didn't waste time trying to be cryptic or overly creative with images. Like the previous reviewer mentioned, ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Loss of a Snide Conscience

    Hi Rage, June here, I like this poem a lot because I can relate. I don't like the constant referral to of the dictator as an "it" because it's awfully ...

    Jun 30, 2013


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