Juniper

Hello there! I'm June! I adore the fact that instead of romancing a person, you romance the sonnet itself in this poem. Your rhyme scheme throughout the poem is nice; ...

Hey there, I'm June, To me, this poem is perfect. It's so simple but says so much in its short life that I can't help but deeply appreciate it. The ...

Hey, Tteele, I think you did well capturing the essence of a depressed person in this poem. It seems other reviewers have given you valuable feedback, so it doesn't make ...

Hey, Sherlock, June here, You have a lot of potential here, and I think where it disappoints is largely due to structural things like line breaks, punctuation, etc. I think ...

Hey there, Emmy! It's nice to see how much your poetry has improved through the ages. This poem is very well done -- it cleanly tells a story and introduces ...

Sollllllll, In the spirit of review day, I am dredging up a somewhat-dated piece of yours to comment on (not because I'm riffling through your portfolio or anything; the forums ...

Hey Catnip, June here, I think it's very brave of you to summarize yourself into a poem and put it on display for the world to see -- I'm not ...

Hey Catnip! June here, I think this poem has a lot of potential. Let's have a stab, shall we? :) We're wingless in this aimless flight Armless in this bitter ...

Hey there! I'm June, I usually find repetition in poetry disagreeable, but here I found it quite the opposite. I liked the way you structured it and incorporated a rhyming ...

Hey there, Flamingo! I'm June, For someone who claims to not do poetry, you did rather well here. You painted an image excellently, and you successfully conveyed the giddy humorousness ...

Hallo, Misstoria! I'm a big fan of the Killers song, so just knowing that it helped inspire this in some way makes me like this piece that much more. I ...

Hey there! June here! (go team, right?) I think you did an excellent job here balancing a rhyme scheme with a meaningful poem that felt neither forced or uneven for ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS! I'm June, It seems as if you've gotten several valuable critiques on this already, so to save being redundant, I'll keep this brief. My ...

Hey there, I'm June, I concur with the previous reviewers when they say that the simplicity of this poem is strongly appreciated. I have a little bit of a qualm ...

Heya, Niteowl, June here again, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece for being everything I love about poetry -- it evokes a vivid image that we can picture for ourselves while ...