Joelsweet

I agree with what the previous person said completely, although without the title, this poem would seem like something out of a sci-fi book. Personally, images of wide spaces and ...

I like the image that this poem puts forth: new beginnings, new earth, refreshment. I like the way it flows, except the last line in the first stanza. I think ...

"Hello darkness, my old friend~" (Just kidding, haha) I really liked this piece, it resonated a lot with me. ^^ I wrote a piece a couple months ago about existential ...

I like the brevity of this poem, and feel like you didn't really need to elaborate. You get your point across so strongly in the length that's already there, and ...

I like the meaning of this poem, but I feel like you had too much repitition of the word "first." You could use different words, maybe, that are synonyms? I ...

Thank you for this, I really needed to read it. c: Did you write this for anyone in particular? Anyways, while this poem has a good flow and message, I ...

I like the imagery in this poem, but I kind of agree with the pervious reviewer. A lot of your long lines can be shortened, like "Going on long walks ...

This piece gives deep insight to how memories from the past can feel to a person through little hints. "Oddly, I feel as though I’ve seen it before, perhaps in ...

AGH your diction is excellent! I also am a big fan of the imagery that you used in this piece. I particularly like it here: "She was no slender little ...

An all too familiar theme, for me in particular. Specific thoughts and associations with mental health issues are brought to light in a metaphorical, yet clear way. As for spelling ...

Honestly, this feels more like a letter than a poem. ^^" The pacing and tone is nice, however. Especially the tone, which remains mostly consistent. A very ranting piece, certainly. ...

I really like this.. It reminds me of the biblical story of the man who was full of many spirits. "We are legion, for we are many." I like how ...

Considering that English is your second language, this is pretty good. I'm not going to go into all the grammar errors, since the previous reviewer already did that. This story ...

I wish this had a title! I almost skipped over it! :c Ugh your flow is fantastic. I read this out loud, and it was even better than reading it ...

I like this a lot. ^^ You have good diction and imagery. Your flow seems mostly good, and I love your pattern. This poem is very relatable to many people; ...