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Hi, Wishes. :) I don't usually venture into the Other section, but I thought I'd stop by anyway, and I saw your piece here. I imagine this is a stand-alone ...

Hi, Carlito! Another beautiful song. :) Lovely style that showed in its flow here as well. The structure is well done, and the theme is easy to relate to. Definitely. ...

Hi, Camo! I really like the theme you have in this song. It's really neat, and quite a sad story. There's also some really good imagery in here. Such a ...

Hi, Carlito! I really liked this song. Again. XD What kind of music is this in? I imagine it's in 4/4, but part of me wants to say it'll be ...

Ha! Hi, Dragon! I liked this a lot. xD (Now, I share a similar opinion to you about country songs, but not completely the same since there is the occasional ...

Hi, AJ! I can detect some nice rhythm in this piece. It flowed very nicely! There were a lot of good moments, too. I particularly liked this part: My best, ...

Hi, Mikster! Back agaaain! Teehee. Yay for random prompts! I love it when they work out into something you're halfway pleased with. That actually kinda worked out for me in ...

Hi, Sassy! This was a beautiful piece. You have such a way with words. Your vocabulary is beautiful and effective. :) Very well done! I don't usually do nitpicks, but ...

Hi, YoungWolf! Totes gonna review this for you. :) Hopefully, it ain't too late, but maybe it'll give insight for future works, too. I really like how this resolves in ...

Hi, Brooke! This is a neat song. It's not typical to hear (or read) a song about being scared of teenagers, but yeah. There are totes some scary teenagers out ...

Hi, Dasia! I kinda liked this song. In the end, I really did. There were awkward moments, but I feel like the message really did come across by the end. ...

Hello, Dasia! The narrative of this song is very well done. And I really liked how you ended with the same phrase in each stanza. It's gentle yet effective reinforcement. ...

Hi, AJ! I think this song is a nice start, but I think it's also missing.... Well, in my opinion, it's missing about half the point. You have some good ...

Hiiii, Live! There were some linebreaks that through me off as I read this, but I'm going to ignore those for now 'cause in the end, you know better how ...

Hi, Keshav! This was an interesting piece. In fact, I think it would make a very cool poem if rewritten as one. (Since, you know, it's a different style of ...