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  • Other » Narrative, General Re: Curiosity

    Hello again, Tobold! Teehee, this piece is adorable. I like the little kid MC you've got going. He's extremely adorable, and I want to hug them. So before I get ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Beautiful Nightmare - The Next Best Thing

    Hi, Toaster! (lol, I love your username, by the way.) Anyway! Happy Review Day! I like this piece a lot. I can definitely feel the speaker's voice and what he's ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: Kidnapped

    Hi, Baby! This was an intriguing piece. You set the scene very nicely. There wasn't much to describe in the truck, and you portrayed what you could very nicely. I ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: Excitement

    Hi, Tobold! This is a fun piece! It was very playful, and I certainly enjoyed it. You have some adorable characters. I just want to pinch their cheeks! *pinches their ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Just My Mind continued (sort of)

    Hi, Elfin! This was really cool, actually. I like where this is going a lot. You told the story very well, and I was able to follow it. Very smooth! ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: It's All in My Head

    Hi, Vous! This was a neat piece. (lol, I just spelled that as peace.) It's difficult to write fast-paced! The voice in this case is well done. I definitely felt ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: do you know me ??

    Hi, Princess! It kind of hurt reading this. Namely because everyone's been picked on at some point -- I certainly had my share -- but not everyone wants to be ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Paper Soul

    Hi, Thirsty! I'm stopping by on our happy Review Day! Very intriguing piece, I must say. There's definitely a weird but cool story behind this, and if you're really planning ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Depressed

    Wow, Yatta! 18 comments. O: I had to check it out! I haven't read the other comments though. Hopefully, that's okay. I mean eighteen ! You are a popular rhino! ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Politics Re: Blood and Oil

    D'awww, Bog. D: Just one verse?! I wish I knew what you wanted me to look into. I'll give you as many of my thoughts as I can to hopefully ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Culture Re: Oldies all I got

    Hi, Tobes! You've an interesting piece here, definitely. In fact, the rhythm was very easily detectable just with the song. It all flowed so well! Kudos on that. Before I ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Why Did You Go?

    Hi, Pixie! Ooooh, lyrics from dear Pixie. 8D This is kind of exciting. Also, I have to babble a little more so this doesn't appear on the front page. Happy ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Albino Maiden of Snow (With Recording!)

    Hi, Bog! I got wicked excited to see there's a recording of this. It's not often I get to listen to the lyrics with the music! (Sad, right?) So weee! ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Softening Of The Blow

    Hi, AJ! Ooh, [possibly] your best work? I must read it! But I have to blabber more 'cause the review appears on the front page today. Okay! (By the way, ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: False Reflection

    Hi, Turtle! I notice people can read, like, the first line of my reviews right now. So I'm going to with you a happy Review Day before moving on to ...

    Jun 24, 2012


Writing is the geometry of the soul.
— Plato