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Re: Curiosity
Hello again, Tobold! Teehee, this piece is adorable. I like the little kid MC you've got going. He's extremely adorable, and I want to hug them. So before I get ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Beautiful Nightmare - The Next Best Thing
Hi, Toaster! (lol, I love your username, by the way.) Anyway! Happy Review Day! I like this piece a lot. I can definitely feel the speaker's voice and what he's ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Kidnapped
Hi, Baby! This was an intriguing piece. You set the scene very nicely. There wasn't much to describe in the truck, and you portrayed what you could very nicely. I ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Excitement
Hi, Tobold! This is a fun piece! It was very playful, and I certainly enjoyed it. You have some adorable characters. I just want to pinch their cheeks! *pinches their ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Just My Mind continued (sort of)
Hi, Elfin! This was really cool, actually. I like where this is going a lot. You told the story very well, and I was able to follow it. Very smooth! ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: It's All in My Head
Hi, Vous! This was a neat piece. (lol, I just spelled that as peace.) It's difficult to write fast-paced! The voice in this case is well done. I definitely felt ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: do you know me ??
Hi, Princess! It kind of hurt reading this. Namely because everyone's been picked on at some point -- I certainly had my share -- but not everyone wants to be ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Paper Soul
Hi, Thirsty! I'm stopping by on our happy Review Day! Very intriguing piece, I must say. There's definitely a weird but cool story behind this, and if you're really planning ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Depressed
Wow, Yatta! 18 comments. O: I had to check it out! I haven't read the other comments though. Hopefully, that's okay. I mean eighteen ! You are a popular rhino! ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Blood and Oil
D'awww, Bog. D: Just one verse?! I wish I knew what you wanted me to look into. I'll give you as many of my thoughts as I can to hopefully ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Oldies all I got
Hi, Tobes! You've an interesting piece here, definitely. In fact, the rhythm was very easily detectable just with the song. It all flowed so well! Kudos on that. Before I ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Why Did You Go?
Hi, Pixie! Ooooh, lyrics from dear Pixie. 8D This is kind of exciting. Also, I have to babble a little more so this doesn't appear on the front page. Happy ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Albino Maiden of Snow (With Recording!)
Hi, Bog! I got wicked excited to see there's a recording of this. It's not often I get to listen to the lyrics with the music! (Sad, right?) So weee! ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: The Softening Of The Blow
Hi, AJ! Ooh, [possibly] your best work? I must read it! But I have to blabber more 'cause the review appears on the front page today. Okay! (By the way, ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: False Reflection
Hi, Turtle! I notice people can read, like, the first line of my reviews right now. So I'm going to with you a happy Review Day before moving on to ...
Jun 24, 2012
