IncohesiveScribbles

Hi MusicalTheaterGirl, This is an amazing story, it's so funny! Fairy Tales that get connected are always the best, i.e. Into The Woods, Hoodwinked, Once Upon A Time etc. This ...

Hi GreenLight, I'm going to have to say I don't really understand this poem. I can see it is about black people but I don't understand "how" it is about ...

Hi Chaser, I like this poem. It's sad how the world is so defeated but it's nice you have someone to rely upon. There are a few minor things that ...

Hello Kayla, I like this prologue. It has an innocent feel to it which slowly changes to a more grim feel that will be the first chapter. I'm not super ...

Dear Dragongirl, I love this short story. It's funny and practical. Honestly if footie pajamas were socially accepted as everyday wear, you'd probably never see me wearing anything else. As ...

Dear ChocolateCello, I LOVE this song. I sang the whole thing. Not only do I love Pitch Perfect, I also love Harry Potter. This is just the perfect combination. It ...

Hi AnonymousR, This is definitely an interesting poem. I have to admit I've thought about all of this before. Most of this is good formatting and makes a person think. ...

Hi FireBird99, I love this poem no matter how silly it is. It might not be the most advanced or deep poem, but it certainly is good. Even simple poetry ...

Hi Aley, This poem is so funny and so true at the same time! I know because I do my laundry that there's one sock that just never seems to ...

Hello Sunset101, I love this poem! It's so funny yes so true. I have to say because it's becoming summer every morning now I seem to wake up with another ...

Hi Miss Gangamash, This is definitely an interesting story I'll give you that. You do write dialogue very well. From what I can tell this story has a very good ...

Hi ChiravianSkies, I like the plot of this story, but it is a little weird to me. Are the mice bipedal? Because to hold a sword they would have to ...

Hello SilloriaD, This is a great story! I'll have to admit I haven't read any other chapters in this story but now I have to. I have to know who ...

Hello Bellator, I absolutely loved that story! It was so sweet but sad at the same time, (It made me misty at the end-- Shhhhhh! Don't tell anyone). There is ...

Hello theironnovelist, I love this poem, and let me tell you, this is a feeling I get all too often. I like how you use the indentations in the middle ...