Horisun

If this was your first time writing, you did an amazing job! can you tag me when the next chapter comes out?

Thank you for the review!

Thanks for the review! They have tray's and stuff because that's just how my Daycare did it. Is that weird? Idk. I guess I'm stretching it a little bit.

You know, I just had a funny idea to change chess to chutes and ladders. I might actually do that.

Sorry, this review had no substance... I kinda got sidetracked... As you can see.

:D I like it! Just so you know, if you liked it the other way, that's fine, I just thought I'd say something.

No Problem!

Huzzah! :D

What's that? On the Horisun? It's a... It's a... Review incoming! So, let me start off by saying that this was a really nice chapter, Ndutu is adorable already, and ...

Oh my gosh, this just made my day ten thousand times better! LOL! This was so great! I love the flow, I love the rhyming, it's just amazing! Bravo!

Hello! And welcome to YWS, I hope you love it as much as me, and others, do! I really like the poem you have here. The word choice was really ...

Don't have time to review today, I will try again tomorrow.

Thank you for the review!

You're right, I'm sure many people may have lied, this is just what I found when I went searching. Thank you for the review.

Thank you!