Horisun

Back for another review! I love these designs for characters. They're all so distinct from one another, and a Victorian Style Vampire as a super villain is hilarious! They feel ...

Happy Review Day, and belated welcome to The Young Writer's Society! I hope you've had an excellent morning so far :D Right away, I was super impressed by the juxtaposition ...

This is a very strong continuation from the last chapter. I’m very excited to be learning more about this stories world building! It’s good to finally get some answers about ...

Hi! I hope you’re having a great day or night! My goodness, this chapter is sweet! As I’m sure I’ve said before, the brewing friendship/relationship between the siren and painter ...

Hello, and happy Review Day! Hope you're having a good one so far! I really enjoyed this read. I liked that it felt rather straightforward, but still maintained that slight ...

Hello, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you're having a good day thus far. The title of this piece caught my attention. I like the way you ...

Hi! Welcome to the Young Writers Society, I hope you're having a good day thus far! I was sort of reminded of the game "Doors," I don't know if you ...

Hello! I hope you're having a good morning. This was a very sweet and gentle collection of poems. They were both light hearted, but laced with deeper meaning. I enjoyed ...

Hello! I hope you're doing well! Welcome to the Young Writer's Society :D The summary of this piece drew me in quickly. I quite enjoy a good bit of suspense, ...

Hi! I hope you're having a good day or night! This was a lovely read. The language used throughout the piece fit well with the story you conveyed. It was ...

Hello! I hope you're having a good afternoon! I was very excited to see you follow up the previous chapter so quickly! Your concept has me very invested, and you've ...

Hello! I hope you're having a great day so far! I really loved the parallels you draw between Neverland and Wonderland. By having the narrator implore their friend to run ...

Hi! I hope you're having a good day thus far! I really enjoyed the simplicity of this poem. Each stanza feels like a snapshot out of the 'heroes' life. Yet ...

Hi! I hope you're having a good day or night! There's so much to love about this poem. It's thesis statement that love doesn't require the prerequisite of liking the ...

Hi there, and good afternoon! First off, I just want to say that I adore your descriptions of the setting! Your use of figurative language is very distinct, and I ...