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Hello, there! This is IronSpark. I only have a few comments--because this is really good! Okay... this is a beautiful poem. I just want to nitpick a little, if that's ...

Hello, there! This is IronSpark. This is a great poem. Just two things: 1. Maybe use some commas for clarity? 2. Some of these sentences are a little awkward. Like ...

Hello, there. Just a short review, as I don't have much time. I have one overall criticism for this piece: showing, not telling. Here's an example of where you tell: ...

Hello, there! Okay, so this is DEFINITELY not the sort of thing I normally review. I'm just going to point out three things about this: 1. "And she loved to ...

Hello, there! Because I don't have much experience with poetry, I'm afraid I'm only going to nitpick here. ;) Okay. So here's the list: 1. "you could'nt feel/see it 'coz ...

Wow, this is great! I spotted little to no errors, so I'll just say what I like about this piece--I don't really feel like nitpicking anyway. :P This story is ...

Um... well, this is kind of a weird thing for me to review (because I don't review poetry well), but here's a SHORT review: 1. Maybe a period at the ...

Wow, this is really good for something you did in just five minutes! I only have a few suggestions, and they're all nitpicks, so bear with me. 1. In the ...

Hello, there! This is a very nice piece. Just a couple opinions: 1. Your formatting can be kind of distracting. 2. I know that this was on purpose, but sometimes ...

This is a very clever piece because it shines a light on how we actually treat our dogs. I'm just going to nitpick a bit: 1. ""I can't believe they ...

Hello, there! This review is mostly nitpicks, just because it's a pretty solid story. I'm sorry if it sounds rude. I'm just nitpicking here, pay no attention to me! :) ...

Hello, there. Okay… this is good. Like, very, very, very good. I'm actually just going to talk about another place you could improve, grammar flaws, since the person beneath me ...

Okay, I'm no poetry expert, so I'll leave the official poem stuff to others. Not that I know what "official poem stuff" entails. :P I just wanted to say how ...

Wow. Just wow. This is one of the best things I've read in a long time. I actually didn't want to read this at first, just because it didn't look ...

I really like this poem for many reasons. First of all, the length. Normally, a short poem is either humorous or boring. But this is beautiful and mysterious… and you ...