GeeLyria

Woah. Hi there, Rdizzy. Alright. So this really needs help from the Enter key. Your chapters are wildly organized. You need to make some spaces for them to breathe. Truth ...

Hi there, AskShirley333. I'm GeeLyria and I'm here to review for you. To be honest, I can easily raise my hand and argue against many of your sentences in this ...

Hi Nargles. You're a wonderful poet, I must say. I've read your other poetry and it's lovely. I'm here to drop you a quick review, because I don't really have ...

Hi there, my friend. I thought, uh, I'd review this for you, so I'm here. :) Alright, so I've read another poem by you, and while reading both of them, ...

Hi there, Mossyra. It's an honor to read your poetry, because I find it lovely. I am here to drop you a quick review. Basically, all I want to suggest ...

Hi there, ShadowsKittykat. I am GeeLyria (obviously,lol), and I'm here to review for you. I'll start off by admitting that even though this is a short poem, I had to ...

Hahaha! So you did write it? XD Amazing! Well, I'm gonna drop you a quick review here. All was going well to me until the third stanza, because I think ...

Hi sl4y41zm3. My face was priceless when I saw your piece before I started reading. My eyes were wide open and my jaw dropped... And that is because your piece ...

Hi there, Abid155! I'm going to drop you a quick review here. Because I have something really important to tell you that could help you immensely in your writing life. ...

Hi Carlito. I am GeeLyria and I am here to review for you. The truth about your piece is that you've brought us a really common situation in a really ...

Hi Yuka. Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it as much as I have. I am Sol, and I will be reviewing your piece today. :) From this piece, ...

Jalmoooooooc~! It's been a while since we last talk, but it's always nice to collide with your writings. :) And yes, I am here to review. I like that this ...

Hi there, therealme. I won't lie, this was quite humorous. I think it has potential. However, I also think it lacks some descriptions. This is written in first person, so ...

Hi there, umaima. :) I'm here to review, as I promised. I noticed the format is going weird on this post, so I will ignore that in order to give ...

Hi, MrsHood97. This is pretty nice. It's short, however, it needs a lot of help. I want to help you as a writer. So I am going to be reviewing ...