Oreos

Hahaha! So you did write it? XD Amazing!

Well, I'm gonna drop you a quick review here. All was going well to me until the third stanza, because I think the "one" should be replaced by "them"... for the simple fact that one Oreo is NEVER enough. Lol, you get me, right? The other thing is in the last stanza; there are two apostrophes missing. Remember that the more professional you are the more serious they will take you as a writer (even when it's a silly poem ) Hahahha. Loved the end! XD

Keep writing!

Hello!

First of all, I think that writing about noms is- WAIT WHAAAT? MY AUTO CORRECT CHANGES 'NOMS' TO 'MOMS'????? DUDE, I'M AUSTRALIAN!!!!

Sorry about that, I was just throwing my iPad off a cliff. So, I think that writing a story about a biscuit is extremely smart. It's not too serious, either, which is good. Funny, lighthearted, and about something people like. Cookies.

There's a lot of repetition. This could be to maintain rhythm, but I don't really see how that works. The beat seemed a bit... Uneven. That is something that could easily be tweaked.

There are a few spelling errors throughout the poem, but those could be typos an are easily fixed.

Overall, the poem was a fun read, but it could use a little bit of help. Improve it a bit and it could rule the world.

I hope that this review has been helpful,

Magma

Hello this is kind of strange.

~Jon~

Well, well, we'll. a Poem about a cookie. Now this should be interesting...
WHEW!! That was intense! I have to say though, some of you spacing is incorrectly placed. As you have two spaces in between two words in some places. And "It" and "Bit" seem to rhyme incorrectly to me. Nonetheless, you still have a great cookie Poem here!

This is awesome! I love it! Oreos shall rule the world!
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