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Re: If love had eyes
Hi there, rememberme! Solvy here to review! Nice poem, I think is good. Now, this review is going to be the other way round. NITPICKS FIRST! If love had eyes ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: You were wrong
Hey QaraQaraQarafriend! Your plushie is going to review for you again! xD Okay, I like the poem, especially the last line. But I'm gonna help you with the puntuation. Poems ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Wood's five senses
Hi, DramaLlama. This poem... dah, you killed me! Beautifully worded! I could imagine everything as I read it. Now I'm happy! Nitpicks: Shhh… -Delete this space- D8 Can you hear ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Cold Anger
Hi there, sgppoetry. Wow! This is awesome, this poem doesn't know the word "cliché". I am impressed, 'cause... honestly, this is one of the best poems I've read so far ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: To Be Cool.
Hi there, egunn! This poem is totally COOL! XD You did a great job! Just a thought. You must say this to be cool. That "this" I would write it ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Always
Hi, Jane! Beautiful poem. Yes, God never leaves us. :) I love it, thanks for reminding me! xD I think I spotted a typo though. We were together, Though everything; ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Not insane, just different
QaraQaraQara!!! I'm your plushie and I'm here to review. Lol. Okay, this is a sad story. He was a jerk. >.> But anyways, this doesn't seem like a poem to ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
Hi Nafe. I just had to post a comment just to say this is brilliant! It shows what normaly happens when we fall in love: Heart vs Brain. Awesome! You're ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: I wonder Why
Hi There Spp. I'm Sol and I'm going to be your reviewer today. Okay, I like what you're talking about in this poem, it's something unusual and reminds me of ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Open, simple
Hi There, Fire! :) I'm Sol, and I'm going to review for you today. I like the poem, the ending was amazing. But, you should check out the puntation. In ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Morbid Circus
Wow. Hi there, Calligraphy. Haha. This poem is cool! I think it's different, I've never seen a sad clown before. I actually feel bad for the clown because they're using ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Impudence
Wow, Cassy. This is amazing. I can't really give you a review here; I really have nothing to say other than that I love it. My favorite paragraph is the ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Me, My Fears, and You
Hi MOIMOW. I must say I'm really impressed about your writing. I really love it. It's catchy and nice to read.
May 1, 2011 -
Re: My Story (As a Ball of Yarn)
Hey there, Gazer. This is really creative. Lol. The fact that the narrator of this story is a ball of yarn is hilarious! I really like it. It made me ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Clawed
Hi Bivrax, I'm here to review as requested. :) Okay... first thing I gotta say is WOW! ! You writing is great, too good for a 13 year old, this ...
Apr 14, 2011
