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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: If love had eyes

    Hi there, rememberme! Solvy here to review! Nice poem, I think is good. Now, this review is going to be the other way round. NITPICKS FIRST! If love had eyes ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You were wrong

    Hey QaraQaraQarafriend! Your plushie is going to review for you again! xD Okay, I like the poem, especially the last line. But I'm gonna help you with the puntuation. Poems ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Wood's five senses

    Hi, DramaLlama. This poem... dah, you killed me! Beautifully worded! I could imagine everything as I read it. Now I'm happy! Nitpicks: Shhh… -Delete this space- D8 Can you hear ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cold Anger

    Hi there, sgppoetry. Wow! This is awesome, this poem doesn't know the word "cliché". I am impressed, 'cause... honestly, this is one of the best poems I've read so far ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: To Be Cool.

    Hi there, egunn! This poem is totally COOL! XD You did a great job! Just a thought. You must say this to be cool. That "this" I would write it ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Always

    Hi, Jane! Beautiful poem. Yes, God never leaves us. :) I love it, thanks for reminding me! xD I think I spotted a typo though. We were together, Though everything; ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Not insane, just different

    QaraQaraQara!!! I'm your plushie and I'm here to review. Lol. Okay, this is a sad story. He was a jerk. >.> But anyways, this doesn't seem like a poem to ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sincerely, Brain

    Hi Nafe. I just had to post a comment just to say this is brilliant! It shows what normaly happens when we fall in love: Heart vs Brain. Awesome! You're ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I wonder Why

    Hi There Spp. I'm Sol and I'm going to be your reviewer today. Okay, I like what you're talking about in this poem, it's something unusual and reminds me of ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Open, simple

    Hi There, Fire! :) I'm Sol, and I'm going to review for you today. I like the poem, the ending was amazing. But, you should check out the puntation. In ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Morbid Circus

    Wow. Hi there, Calligraphy. Haha. This poem is cool! I think it's different, I've never seen a sad clown before. I actually feel bad for the clown because they're using ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Impudence

    Wow, Cassy. This is amazing. I can't really give you a review here; I really have nothing to say other than that I love it. My favorite paragraph is the ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Me, My Fears, and You

    Hi MOIMOW. I must say I'm really impressed about your writing. I really love it. It's catchy and nice to read.

    May 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Story (As a Ball of Yarn)

    Hey there, Gazer. This is really creative. Lol. The fact that the narrator of this story is a ball of yarn is hilarious! I really like it. It made me ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Clawed

    Hi Bivrax, I'm here to review as requested. :) Okay... first thing I gotta say is WOW! ! You writing is great, too good for a 13 year old, this ...

    Apr 14, 2011


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