Open, simple

Hi There, Fire! I'm Sol, and I'm going to review for you today. I like the poem, the ending was amazing. But, you should check out the puntation. In my opinion some commas would be nice.

The-Fire-godess wrote:You kiss me as you always do ,
everything seems so simple with you.

The-Fire-godess wrote:There are no secrets hidden deep,
not mumbling worries as you sleep.

The-Fire-godess wrote:How can this be? Still I can't understand
why you're so easy going and unplanned,

The-Fire-godess wrote:Life isn't as simple as you make it appear,

The-Fire-godess wrote:Even the happy people have a depth full of fear.
So please don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
I'm here for you, I promise, I refuse to let you go.

helloo
really sweet poem!! I don't really have any criticism

Life isn't as simple as you make it appear
Even the happy people have a depth full of fear.
So please don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
I'm here for you, I promise, I refuse to let you go.

I liked reading this. It's kind of sweet.
I liked these lines very much:
"Life isn't as simple as you make it appear
Even the happy people have a depth full of fear."
Nice one!!!

Well, I'm not really one for poems that rhyme, simply because in serious poems, they can really take away from the poem itself. However, even though I didn't particulary care for this type of poem, your rhyming scheme was good and nothing sounded rushed until this part:

Even the happy people have a depth full of fear.
So please don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
I'm here for you, I promise, I refuse to let you go.