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Hi there, Lycando. :) Alright. Here to review. Firstly, I must say that the subject you're bringing us is thought provocative, because you never actually say what is really happening. ...

Ahhh. Hi, Bhayden71297. Amazing narrative poem. I just imagine it as a telling in a movie. It is entertaining, it is nicely worded, and it flows neatly. If I'd have ...

Lovely, Panda. I mean, Hi. Where did my manners go? Actually, I'm silly, I know, but I was thinking how this poem is like a panda. White and Black. It ...

Fullmetal13! Hi. Welcome to YWS. I'm here to give my honest opinion. So, there, I warned you. Naaah. I'm not that harsh. But honestly, at first I was like, "Meh. ...

Aw... Hi there, unmarkedterritory. This is amazing. I must say, I enjoyed it real bad. xD This is one thought provoker poem, and I love that. It just... It's like ...

Hi, mShujin. I must say that I'm a fan. Firstly because this is somehow simple and still unique. Lovely imagery, nice wording, and sweet; it's just so easy to read, ...

Oh, Micki... You're such a cool bean, mehn. Amazing. While reading, I would just keep remembering Dr. Seuss. It flows so nicely, and it is very entertaining. ^_^ I enjoyed ...

Hi, disheartenedcat. Love the name, lol. I am Solly, and I've just read your poem, and I'll share my observations now. That's all I'll say for now because I'm socially ...

Hi, shoaib. I'm just here to let you know that you're a wonderful poem and you've written a lovely poem. It flows beautifully, the subject is interesting and it's simply ...

Hello, Double H. ^_^ We hear it everywhere. It's something people, love to share. First, I believe the punctuation in this first stanza is a little imprudent, for the comma ...

Hm. I like the concept of it. But here are my observations: The first half is thought-provocative, which makes it catchy and we want that. But then it just becomes ...

Hola! Me gusta mucho ver cosas en español en YWS. Pienso que tu poema es simple, pero algo profundo, y eso lo hace muy especial. No tengo mucho que decir, ...

Hi Eyetart. I am here to review, as requested. I won't go around putting frosting on this, for I will try to make it as concise and clear as possible. ...

Hi, Gummie. Lol. I am not going to be harsh with you. I'm going to give you some suggestions. In my opinion, the poem is really cute

Hi, SmileWithoutRegret. In general, your poem is very well written. One of two options: you either put a lot of effort into it, or poetry comes naturally to you. Although, ...