GLaDOS

You did really well with this. I appreciate the fact that you managed to keep up a rhyme scheme throughout the poem and you also managed to make it flow ...

Hey Shauna. Gladdy here to review your first poem! I'm foolish for ever believing that you were the one.. It'd be better if you took off the dots on the ...

Hey Becky, Gladdy here to review some of your work. My butt cheeks drip One: There's a random space before this line, just go back and fix that. Two: I ...

Heyo. Gladdy here for a review! First of all, shaping: There are a few lines that are way too long to be in a poem. One line (in poetry) should ...

Hey, Writer (nice profile pic). Gladdy here for a review! Too fat they said, If you're going to use a reference to something someone else said, put it in quotations. ...

Hullo! Gladdy here for a review. Alright, I wouldn't recommend centering this, because it's a longer poem. It's fine to center it if it's a shorter poem, but you should ...

Hey Mergie. Time for a little review! I'd like to point out that you used some bold and unneeded lines in this poem. Rather than having these lines, you could ...

Heyo Deskbro! GLaxDOS here to check out some of your work. I'm glad you put this into stanzas, it's been a bit of a mess trying to tell everyone that ...

Hello fellow YWSer! Gladdy here for a quality review~ Try to separate your poem into stanzas. It creates a sense of organization and it goes a long way. I would ...

Hello fellow YWSer, Gladdy here for a quality review. Alright, first of all, shape your lines. Shaping your lines makes the poem look neater and feel neater. This is also ...

Heyo, I like these poems but I have a few things I want to comment on. And I am at home. This felt like more of an ending than what ...

A good bit of poetry you have! But don't think I won't have nothing to nitpick on~ On to a cold hard surface Seeing as you used a comma to ...

Hey Sky, nice to see you've written some poetry. I like the simplicity of this poem, but I do have a few nitpicks on it. Slap on my face, fell ...

Hello Ace, Gladdy here to give you a quality review, eh? The first thing I noticed was the shape of your lines. It's important to shape your lines as to ...

Hey, Maverick. The first thing I noticed was how this thing is organized. I love this poem, but it'd look so much nicer if you separated it into paragraphs. The ...