ForeverYoung299

Hello there! Forever here with a review! I too love winter and u did an appreciable job in putting your feelings in the poem. I can feel through your poem ...

Prologue It was a dark and stormy night. An Oblivion Rip had just opened, leaving two figures at the top of the tallest mountain in all of South Cloud Isles. ...

The title hooks the reader from the beginning. I spent a long time interpreting your poem and here u go with my interpretation. Yes, life indeed is hard, hardest of ...

First of all, I wish that you are okay with your emotions and feelings. Now coming to the poem, your poem elaborates on the mental condition of a suicidal person. ...

Hello! You two did a great job collabing! Here for a review!! This caught my attention as I have always wondered about the POV of each and every creatures and ...

Hello Niveda!! Again! Ruth stood in front of the art-room door, heart filled with apprehension. Here, does apprehension mean worry or angst? If yes, I would suggest replacing that ‘apprehension’ ...

Hello! Here for a review! This is longer than the other two and I guess it will be better this time. One thing I forgot to say is you can ...

Hello! Here for a review! First of all, increase the size of the letters and I guess the font colour is also a bit lighter than black. Pls change these ...

Yessssss I completely agree with you and your poem! Why should the hero always be good? The person can be a bad one and that is what makes a good ...

Hello!!! Here for a short review!!! Nitpicks: But I'm sure I'd said I prefer jam Will not it be I would say? Or you prefer ‘I had said’? No other ...

Tick tick tick– I am here for a review!!!! Akanbright, you are doing awesome!! Now let me come to the review. Tick, tick, tick goes the hand of time which ...

Here for the review. WOW! Literally Wow!! I suggest you to write what you wrote below my comment. That makes it a bit clearer. Now coming to your poem, my ...

Hello! Here for a review!! Recently, I am reading the sad poetry a lot which breaks me into a thousand parts! The same applies for your poem. Love in itself ...

Hello!!! Forever here for a review!!! I love reading short poems!!! The concept of dreaming– I keep on dreaming day and night...like really. Earlier, I used to think these are ...

Hello!! Here for a review!!! I really liked that concept of being mentally crippled! You also showed that physically she was crippled, but I liked the mentally being crippled concept ...