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Re: The Plight of Becoming an Adult
Hi InfiniteRectangles jessiebear here to tell you what I liked about this poem and how you can fixe it as well. And I hope what I say will be of ...
Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: turning seventeen (spoken word)
Hi Pomp jessiebear here to do a shirt review on your work. I hope what I say will help you with your writing. Wow this poem is fantastic. And the ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: Potato
Hi friend jessiebear here to do a little review on your work. And I hope my review will help you with your work. First of I loved the poem it ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: Stinky
Hi friend jessiebear here. Okay this poem is fan tactic. The riming is good. And the name of the poem is what made me come and have a look at ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: Cosmic Queen
Hi OsirisCreed jessiebear here to tell you how nice your poem was. First thing witch I liked about it is that it all rimed so well. The next thing witch ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: Too Blind Too See
Hi MatthewAaron jessiebear here to review your work. And I hope what I say will help you now and maybe later in your life. And I hope this dose not ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: King Of the Clouds
Hi TegaEdais jessiebear here to review your work and I hope what I say will be of any help to you. And if the review sounds like I am being ...
Dec 19, 2015 -
Re: One Last Thing
hi jessiebear here to do a review. Okay this is a lovey. But I do have one are tow things you need to fixe in it. Okay I think you ...
Dec 17, 2015 -
Re: Hands
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Dec 17, 2015
Hi AustereMelodies, jessiebear here with a review on your poem and I hope what I say will be any help. :D Okay first off I loved the poem and this ... -
Re: Courting
hi BFG jessiebear here to review your work. and I hope what I say will be a lot of help. Okay this is grate to start with. Now to start ...
Dec 17, 2015 -
Re: The American Dream
Hi Yomna jessiebear here to do a review on your work and I hope what I say will be any yours to you. Okay this is grate to start with. ...
Dec 17, 2015 -
Re: A pause in the journey
Hi Adreamer jessiebear here to do a review on your work and I hope it will helps a lot as you keep on writing. First of I love the poem ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: why be "Poor at heart rich in wealth"
Hi IndianAtHeart jessiebear hear to review and help you with your work and I hope what I say will be of any help to you and so you can in ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: keys
Hi jessiebear hear to do a review. just like what Blenny said If this was written last minute then you are an incredible writer and you have great Ideas. I ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: A girl of Desperation
Hi lenacass9 jessiebear hear to wright a short review to help you with your poem and I hope my advise is help fell . I love the poem and how ...
Dec 14, 2015