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Conquest of Shadows ~ The Flames With In

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Bright

    Hi Shikora here with a review on your lovely poem. Let's get to it. I think this poem was really good, and you wrote it very well, it had a ...

    Jan 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: A slow and most pain full fight

    Hi Shikroa here with a review. To be honest I have know idea what the meaning of this poem is. But it was interesting to read, but i did see ...

    Jan 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: Days Caesar Cried

    Hi, Shikora here with a review, on your lovely poem. Let's get to it. I really like this poem, it was very interesting. What drew me in to read this ...

    Jan 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Ants That Made Me Smile

    Hi Shikora here with a review on your great peace of work. Let's begin. The name to your poem was a really good fit, I think it tells you everything ...

    Jan 9, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: i feel so lonely

    Hi Shikora here with a review. Okay let's jump right into it. I really like this poem and everything about it, I think you chose the perfect name for this ...

    Jan 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Other Re: Regret

    Hi Shikora here with a review. I really like it that you jump right into the story, it's like nothing is holding you back. I really like the name you ...

    Jan 8, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Hometown

    Hi Shikora here with a review. I really like this story, it had a very good plot to it, and got me hooked by the first sentence. I think you ...

    Jan 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Writers Block

    Hi Shikora here with a review. To be honest I can't find anything wrong with this poem, It's just a work of art. I really like how you start the ...

    Jan 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Agent Lightning Operation TreeBeast Chapter 2: Teachers and sawblades

    Hi Shikora here with yet another review. What I like I really like how this story is going at the moment, it looks like you have good plan set for ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Agent lightning Operation TreeBeast Prologue-Chapter 1

    Hi Shikora here with a review. I really like how you begin this story, it was nice having the short intro in the beginning. It let me get interested in ...

    Jan 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 8

    Hi Shikora here with a review. This is a very interesting chapter. I really was expecting like a really big surprise in this chapter, when you left us on a ...

    Jan 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Daydream

    Hi Shikora here with a review. I really liked the name to this story, it drew me in right away. I think your name fits the story very well. But ...

    Jan 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Lost Dragon 11.1

    Hi Shikora here with a review. What i like I really like how you began this chapter, it was really interesting and it drew in me in right away, but ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: carpentry, trivial i know

    Hi Shikora here with a review. This was a really lovely poem you have wrote here, I really like the message you have put through the words. As I read ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Human Shell

    Hi Shikora here with a review. This was a really good story, i really liked reading it. I really like the name to this story, it was a really good ...

    Dec 30, 2018


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