Hey there, agronaa! I'm Vilnius, here to review your awesome chapbook excerpt!
So, upon finishing it, I was impressed-- you've turned a historical event with limited records ad few emotional pieces related to it into a haven of feelings and knowledge. You've done a great job of summarizing the Ides of March without rambling into a history lesson like I would, which is a great thing 99.9% of the time.
You've used amazing imagery! The only issues I really have are the grammatical bits, but some poets don't use punctuation/capitalization for various reasons.
Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!!
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