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Re: On Stage
I'm shocked that this poem got as little attention as it did! This was brilliant! I really liked how you started with one body part and then kept adding on ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: Those Three Words
Wow! This is really funny! I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more attention! For most of the poem I was expecting it to "I love you" or something sweet like that, ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: Drip, Drop
Hello InfiniteRectangles! I really liked this poem :D The format is fun and creative and I like the repetition of the words "drip drop" to reinforce the title and you ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: Me
I love this piece a lot! I really like how you just put it out there. No bulls*** sugarcoating. I like that. You told everyone how you feel and you ...
Jun 18, 2012 -
Re: A Long Time Ago
Wow. This is really good and I love the idea and the message behind it. It's very inspiring to me, and I just love that! There were no spelling errors ...
Jun 6, 2012 -
Re: 3548 Miles
Hi! Here is your review, as promised! Okay, so I really liked how you displayed your emotions. Explaining how love is a good thing and a bad thing. Or at ...
Jun 5, 2012 -
Re: The Puzzle
This is really good. There were a few spelling errors, but other than that, I think you did a wonderful job :)
Jun 4, 2012 -
Re: The Harmony of Silence: Chapter One
Ok, so overall this is a really great story, but there are a few mistakes I would like to point out. There were a couple of spelling errors here and ...
Jun 4, 2012 -
Re: No one
I really like this one, and I can relate to it too. This is a topic that not many people write about and that's what makes you a good writer. ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Emotions
I know how you feel -_- Great poem by the way! It's short and simple, but the reader still understands the message. One thing I would like to point out ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Our bridge
I really liked this piece. It really gives the reader a feel for the character's pain and what they went through. It doesn't say what the traitor did, which makes ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Time Bomb
I really like this piece. It was brilliant and easy to relate to. The second line is just a tad bit long though. Other than that, this is a wonderful ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Glass Houses
I really liked this. It's short, but still carries the message. The lines are short and snappy, providing somewhat of a rhythm. The one line that kind of bothered me ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Goodbye
This is really good :) I like how you worded it in a way that it makes you wonder. And when you made the lines repeat, you did it in ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Oggo the Dwarf's Adventure in the Underland!
I really liked this poem! You are very creative, especially in the naming of the characters. I really loved the rhyme scheme and the rhythm of the whole piece. And ...
May 13, 2012
