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FallenAngel97

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: On Stage

    I'm shocked that this poem got as little attention as it did! This was brilliant! I really liked how you started with one body part and then kept adding on ...

    Dec 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Those Three Words

    Wow! This is really funny! I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more attention! For most of the poem I was expecting it to "I love you" or something sweet like that, ...

    Dec 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Drip, Drop

    Hello InfiniteRectangles! I really liked this poem :D The format is fun and creative and I like the repetition of the words "drip drop" to reinforce the title and you ...

    Dec 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Me

    I love this piece a lot! I really like how you just put it out there. No bulls*** sugarcoating. I like that. You told everyone how you feel and you ...

    Jun 18, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Historical Fiction Re: A Long Time Ago

    Wow. This is really good and I love the idea and the message behind it. It's very inspiring to me, and I just love that! There were no spelling errors ...

    Jun 6, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 3548 Miles

    Hi! Here is your review, as promised! Okay, so I really liked how you displayed your emotions. Explaining how love is a good thing and a bad thing. Or at ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Puzzle

    This is really good. There were a few spelling errors, but other than that, I think you did a wonderful job :)

    Jun 4, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Dramatic Re: The Harmony of Silence: Chapter One

    Ok, so overall this is a really great story, but there are a few mistakes I would like to point out. There were a couple of spelling errors here and ...

    Jun 4, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: No one

    I really like this one, and I can relate to it too. This is a topic that not many people write about and that's what makes you a good writer. ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Emotions

    I know how you feel -_- Great poem by the way! It's short and simple, but the reader still understands the message. One thing I would like to point out ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Our bridge

    I really liked this piece. It really gives the reader a feel for the character's pain and what they went through. It doesn't say what the traitor did, which makes ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Time Bomb

    I really like this piece. It was brilliant and easy to relate to. The second line is just a tad bit long though. Other than that, this is a wonderful ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Glass Houses

    I really liked this. It's short, but still carries the message. The lines are short and snappy, providing somewhat of a rhythm. The one line that kind of bothered me ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Goodbye

    This is really good :) I like how you worded it in a way that it makes you wonder. And when you made the lines repeat, you did it in ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Oggo the Dwarf's Adventure in the Underland!

    I really liked this poem! You are very creative, especially in the naming of the characters. I really loved the rhyme scheme and the rhythm of the whole piece. And ...

    May 13, 2012


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