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Re: For Every Laugh
Hello, This is really, really good! Each line has a simple idea, and it's able to convey so much emotion at the same time. I think each line flows really ...
Apr 16, 2019 -
Re: Seeing you again
Hello again, Back at it again with another great poem! It's well-written, and I could feel the emotions conveyed from this idea of a relationship that didn't last. The last ...
Apr 16, 2019 -
Re: Side Effects
Hello, Reading through this felt so real! It's really well-written, and it has a lot of imagery. It's a real disorder, and you really made this come to life... and ...
Apr 16, 2019 -
Re: The Ocean Of Hearts
Hello, This is such a well-written poem! I really like all the emotion that was conveyed really well from it... and how each line flowed really smoothly together... It's all ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: The aftermath or you leaving
Hello, I think this is such a nicely-written poem! You were able to convey a lot of emotion through these lines, and I felt all of it. Even in the ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: This is Goodbye
Hello, This is really well-written! I could feel so much emotion being conveyed from this... every line told a heartbreaking story that kept me hooked throughout the entire thing. I ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: Daring to take up space
Hello, This is a well-written poem! I love the imagery and how you brought each of the four seasons to life. The metaphors were really effective as well. It was ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: The one who took my pain away - a sonnet
Hello, This is a really heartfelt sonnet! The theme was clear and expressed really well throughout each line. I could feel the emotion plainly being conveyed from this character, so ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Remain
Hello, I really love the lyrics of this song! If it was made into an actual song, I'm sure I would love to listen to it. It's well-written, the imagery ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Better Off
Hello, This is a nicely-written poem! I could feel all the emotion of heartbreak conveyed from this, so you did a great job on that. You focused well on the ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: At The End
Hello hiraeth, The first thing I want to say is... wow. This is such a beautifully-composed story... I loved every bit of it. I'm leaving a review because I think ...
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: True Love
This is really nicely written! I love all the emotion you were able to convey in showing the whole relationship between these two characters. I've read a lot of poems ...
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: monster
Hello 4revgreen! I just want to say that I really like this poem! It's short, but it's more than enough to give me the chills. I love the imagery, the ...
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: With the melting of the snow
This is a beautifully written poem! I love the emotions being conveyed in this poem... I could feel every single bit of it. You also have a lot of good ...
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: The Captain
This is really nicely-written! I was so hooked on to the beginning of the poem... you used a great sense of imagery - it's as if I could see myself ...
Apr 11, 2019
