ElvenJedi

Amazing, as always! I love your style, it's very simplistic but yet there's so much weight to every single word. I do have a bit of confusion about the 2nd ...

Since this is obviously a personal and meaningful poem, I don't feel write dissecting is like I normally would do in a review, I hope you don't mind. There's nothing ...

Heya, this is ElvenJedi, here for a review! Overall, I definitely enjoyed reading this! I'm a grammar freak, and as far as I could tell there weren't any grammatical or ...

Heya, this is ElvenJedi, here for a review! First off, WOW. This poem is incredibly unique and original, I love it so much! I love the concept of the stage, ...

Heya, this is ElvenJedi, here for a review! I loved the innocence in this poem, simplistic yet descriptive quality is has is fantastic! One thing I suggest is the rhyme ...

Heya, this is ElvenJedi, here to review your work! First off, this poem is amazing! I could literally feel the hope emanating from the words as the mood changed throughout ...

Heya, this is ElvenJedi, here to review your work! First off, this poem is very unique, and I love it's meaning and imagery. Definitely enjoyed reading it! Now, onto the ...

Heya, this is ElvenJedi, here to review your work! To be completely honest, there is nothing negative to say about this work. The rawness of it is very clear, and ...

Heya, this is ElvenJedi, here to review your poem! First off, I really like how real and descriptive the wording was! I really like the line "But I've only known ...

Heya, this is ElvenJedi, here to review your work! First off, I absolutely love the words you chose in this poem and the meaning behind it all. Great job! Anyway, ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here to review your work! This is a very nice piece, and I enjoyed reading it. You created a dark atmosphere very well, so great job! ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for a review! First off, this was a very powerful piece and I definitely enjoyed reading it. Now onto some critique. dear father, veins decorate ...

Heya, this is Jedi here for a review! First of all, I really enjoyed this poem, it wasn't boring and it was very poetic and had a very strong mood, ...

Heya, Jedi here for a review! Unrequited love is a very popular topic, but this is very unique, you did a wonderful job of making an old idea fresh. But ...

Heya, this is jedi, here with another review! This piece was very peaceful seeming, but filled with emotion as well. I think you accomplished that very well and it fits ...