hello there
first of all i want to say this piece is just AMAZING!
i loved the idea of this poem it's very unique and i kind of find it touchy, because of the feeling of finding yourself and facing the bad things in life and in YOU.
"I look into those eyes, ones I forgot were just windows."
i loved how you used the saying " eyes are windows to the soul", it captured the feelling in a good way.
my fav line is "One by one I let them out, parts of me I will not miss." i totally loved it, it is quite catchy and describes how you have your''bad'' things that you want to get rid of.
this part
"A stronger voice within me, one I thought was gone.
Reminds me that good things can come, from those who correct their wrongs."
this one confused me at first, i thought it's a bad voice or an evil one but then i got it.
it's the good angelic voice that gives you hope even after doing bad stuff and make you realise you still have a chance.
i'm sorry if this didn't help or seem as a review ..it's because i loved your poem that i didn't find any flaws.
i wish you write more ...keep it up
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