What a fun little poem! I enjoyed reading it. It reminded me a little of Velveteen Rabbit and Toy Story. I think the last line was one syllable too long, but that should be an easy fix. Another line that sounded a bit too long was "Waiting until it can see your smile". But that could sound just fine depending on how you read it. Other than that there's really nothing else to review about! Hoppy Christmas! Good job!
Points: 97
Reviews: 103
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