Elijah

I really like the is really sad that you are talking about a person with problems who is not understood by others because he is different.Many people hate each their ...

I can not say a lot about this work because I did not fully understood the meaning of this work so I would want you to explain it to me ...

Hello,hello there,fangirl! Here for a short review but I hope still helpful! Anyways for this review I just want to tell you for several mistakes that are in this work ...

Amazing flow and smoothness. You continue to amaze me with your brilliant thinking and unique way of writing poetries,woman. To be really...but really honest,the punctuation is off.But I see that ...

The beginning just killed me! Good job,woman! (never gonna change this nicknames of yours sowwy dear) I like this short poetry even though I am wanting it to be longer! ...

So young but still you have such a good work written in such a beautiful delicate way. I like it a lot and I am quite surprised that you are ...

I did not think of judging this work anyways so do not worry about this.Your use of the vocabulary is expanded and the way you describe the feeling of the ...

Hello hello,raindrop here to check this lonely short but still beautiful work of yours! So now let's start with the first thing the readers see.The tittle. It is not that ...

Hello,hello! Raindrop here for a review! I am glad to see something different here. So let's start with this review,shall we? I am interested in this sotry a really caught ...

First of all,I want to say ..Welcome here and hope you have a great time in this site! Also,good job at your first work which i personally like but still ...

The way you say 'one' as a start of each of the paras was kind of odd in my opinion but still kind of catchy.I do not know how to ...

Pretty,stunning and emotional as always! Anyways,I love this work and the way you talk about someone being in relationship,loving the other but still they hurt each other and fear for ...

The last line 'forever' was kind of pointless and out of sense for me atleast in this short is a good work still I can say and admit. I am ...

Good job with this one.I will not correct it or anything.I think other reviewers had already put the bad things on the line and you had heard them out so ...

Raindrop here for a review!First of all I want to say that I may be correcting the punctuation all over because on more places you have it,on other-you I hope ...