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Re: Falling In Love With An Idiot (Chapter 3)
King here Hello there. I am here to check the following third part of this story now. I honestly do not remember everything from this story (prev. parts), because you ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 1
King here I am here to check and enjoy your lovely work. I will tell my honest opinion and ways to correct some parts of this work. So let's start ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Morality
King here Hello there, I may not be able to make such a long review, but I will try to help. I like the idea, because I think you are ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Space Prince Story Chapter 1
King here Hello, here to give you a review. I like the main idea and plot of this work, seriously. Space and sci-fi, in general. Everything is okay and the ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: Memories or Nightmares?
King here Oh, I see you are new. I am always gladful to review something from a new member. Something fresh and new. So, let's start with this work and ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: The Satyr
King here Hello there, here to give you a short (maybe) review. I am really sorry, that this time, I will be more negative and maybe harsh about this work, ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: How they found him.
King here Hello there, I am here to check your lovely work now. Let's go through this work one by one, and see if we can make this work point ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: My Human
Hello, King here, for a hopefully helpful review for you. So, first of all, the tittle was kind of confusing for me, and I thought this work will be for ...
Apr 25, 2016 -
Re: The Mermaid
King here! I smelt the yaoi and the Hetalia feels, so I came here to check. I know them from fics and the anime, originally. I can not say anything ...
Apr 25, 2016 -
Re: A Letter To My Angel
This is really heart warming and sweet, emotional and still sad. It is sad but still makes the reader happy. Smile and cry, let's say? I do not think this ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: The Wait
I like the way this work is written. Some lines does not start from the very start, and it is kind of fun and interesting, at least for me. The ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: Little quick write
Hello there! King here for a short review. Others before me had told you what they think, and their thoughts about this are kinda similar, to be honest. So what ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: Ramble Poem
Hello, King here for a short review. I think I do not have a lot to say about this work, something negativr and bad, I meant, of course. I really ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: Burning Eyes
Good that you had mentioned, that the length of the stanzas and the rhyme is intentional, if no, I was going to complain more, but at least, I do not ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: The After Story
King here for another review, specially devilishly delivered to you, lovely writer. So, as always, let's start with what I like in your work. I think, that what I like ...
Apr 24, 2016
