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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Falling In Love With An Idiot (Chapter 3)

    King here Hello there. I am here to check the following third part of this story now. I honestly do not remember everything from this story (prev. parts), because you ...

    Apr 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 1

    King here I am here to check and enjoy your lovely work. I will tell my honest opinion and ways to correct some parts of this work. So let's start ...

    Apr 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Morality

    King here Hello there, I may not be able to make such a long review, but I will try to help. I like the idea, because I think you are ...

    Apr 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: Space Prince Story Chapter 1

    King here Hello, here to give you a review. I like the main idea and plot of this work, seriously. Space and sci-fi, in general. Everything is okay and the ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Memories or Nightmares?

    King here Oh, I see you are new. I am always gladful to review something from a new member. Something fresh and new. So, let's start with this work and ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: The Satyr

    King here Hello there, here to give you a short (maybe) review. I am really sorry, that this time, I will be more negative and maybe harsh about this work, ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: How they found him.

    King here Hello there, I am here to check your lovely work now. Let's go through this work one by one, and see if we can make this work point ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: My Human

    Hello, King here, for a hopefully helpful review for you. So, first of all, the tittle was kind of confusing for me, and I thought this work will be for ...

    Apr 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Mermaid

    King here! I smelt the yaoi and the Hetalia feels, so I came here to check. I know them from fics and the anime, originally. I can not say anything ...

    Apr 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: A Letter To My Angel

    This is really heart warming and sweet, emotional and still sad. It is sad but still makes the reader happy. Smile and cry, let's say? I do not think this ...

    Apr 24, 2016
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The Wait

    I like the way this work is written. Some lines does not start from the very start, and it is kind of fun and interesting, at least for me. The ...

    Apr 24, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Little quick write

    Hello there! King here for a short review. Others before me had told you what they think, and their thoughts about this are kinda similar, to be honest. So what ...

    Apr 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Ramble Poem

    Hello, King here for a short review. I think I do not have a lot to say about this work, something negativr and bad, I meant, of course. I really ...

    Apr 24, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Burning Eyes

    Good that you had mentioned, that the length of the stanzas and the rhyme is intentional, if no, I was going to complain more, but at least, I do not ...

    Apr 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The After Story

    King here for another review, specially devilishly delivered to you, lovely writer. So, as always, let's start with what I like in your work. I think, that what I like ...

    Apr 24, 2016


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