The Wait

I like this poem a lot! Good job. It is short and sweet! I'm not sure I understand why some of it is italicized but I like the wording. Along with the italics, why is some of it indented and not the rest? (I'm sorry if this is an actual form of poetry. I obviously don't know. I don't write poetry.)

This is definitely a great poem. I do think that the face at the end of the poem throws me off though. I understand that a lot of people on this website do that but it takes away from the sophistication on the poem. I think that it is unnecessary.

I like the way this work is written. Some lines does not start from the very start, and it is kind of fun and interesting, at least for me. The fave after the last line is cute, also, something I had not seen. Shows a lot more emotions and feelings than many sentences can try to show us, the readers and reviewers. Your punctuation and full vocabulary use is on point, so I can not even complain about them. I like fun and smooth flow and rhyme. It make me smile in the end of the work, just like the face. I like the ending, really catchy. Well, nothing more I will say.

Keep on writing.

Hey Arzoo,
Nice lyrics. I see there is so rhyming, that's cool. I would add a bit more to it. I see this is a great start but, try to develop it a bit more. I like the God and Lord parts. Ok, so I see what you are trying to express. Like your last reviewer, I wish you the best of lucks to find your soulmate. LOL. Hey, I once read soulmates are said to be soulmates because their atoms were together at the start of the universe. I was so mind blown by this even if it is just a hypothesis. But, hey you don't always hear a scientific explanation about soulmates xd. Just a cool thing I wanted you to know. By the way, you will find your soulmate when the right time comes. You will know it when it happens.
EmmaEaton

Tis I, Soulfulwriter coming to lavish...ravish? Lavish you in reviews and personal opinions about your literary piece of art -dramatic male voice.-

-clears throat and goes to normal voice,- Review time. -spirit fingers- nothing wrong with it that I can see. Don't worry this won't cost a fee.

Personal Opinion. -no dramatic impulses this time.- Finding a soulmate that is no joke, you gotta kiss many toads, frogs, and dogs before that happens. But, the lucky ones are the ones that find them in elementary school, middle school, and high school and they stay together. Lucky bishes >.>. But, there were plenty of times when I thought I found mine to only find out that it was nothing but a game to them. dirty bastards. But, all in all, I do love the poem this would probably be another one I would 'borrow' if I couldn't think of one right off the top of my head.

Keep writing the right way.