Elijah

King Here WHAT?! Marldon is dead? I can not take it anymore. The emotions are killing me. Anyways, very good part. I love it even if it was so dramatic ...

I am full of curiousity here! Tell me what is going to happen soon because if you do not, the feelings will kill me soon! Anywas, this part was really ...

King Here Hello there, Eros! This part was really sad, dramatic and heart breaking. At least they feeded her. These men do not look like a very bad people. Maybe ...

Hello there! I like the comparing of romance with phones. This was really unexpected and surprising. but I like the way your voice This is the only line that is ...

Hello there! Here to give maybe a useless review. I like you as an writer so I felt the need to point out my opinion about this work of yours. ...

King Here Hello there, Eros! I like this unfortunate that we can not know whose body is the murdered one in her house. Anyways, this part was full of mystery ...

Hello there! First of all, welcome to YWS and I hope you enjoy your time here. I really can not say much about this work which is a complain because ...

Hello there! First of all, I am sorry that this may be a very short and not that helpful review for you and your story. I see this is only ...

King Here First of all, hope you excuse me for this very short review but I will still try to be helpful here! This is a very heart warming and ...

King Here I got even more curious! I hope you keep on working on this story. Anyways, about this part, I think you had added the horror and tragedy theme ...

King Here This part is amazing! Well, not my favourite one from them all because it kind of scared me just too much and I felt worried for the main ...

King Here Hello there! Here to review your following 16th part. Zanjeer is kinda the interesting new character added as I see. A new male who will be in this ...

King Here Hello there! Here to review your amazing work, lovely writer. As always, I follow your story and I feel bad that I had not noticed the release of ...

Hello here! Just saw that as something new as an idea. I actually had not checked any works of yours these days and I feel guilty about it but well, ...

King Here Hello there, I am here as requested. I am sorry that I did not see your request sooner. I was having school and I was not in the ...