Dreamergirl

Heyy, This is a really nice piece. I adore the imagery and you've potrayed it really well. :) The concept is refreshing. But then, I think you should try reframing ...

Wow. The first few lines have of this piece have held me captive to read more from you. This piece is beautiful, the imagery used here is potrayed extremely well. ...

This is adorable. The way you've written it is so beautiful. :) I absolutely awe these lines. :) But I can't get you off my mind, you're running laps one ...

I love this. You're poety/song is amazing. The pre-chorus is awesome. :D I absolutely adore these lines, I feel like they relate to me well. Don't walk inside my lines. ...

This is one really good piece. :D The statements that you make using this "I wish" are questions that many people often ask. It's something that many people feel genuinely. ...

This plot is really sweet, straight and beautiful in it's own way. It uniquely talks about one's dependence on god and the sense of graitude. The whole poem delivers a ...

Hi, I really like this. I think the plot's really great. Maybe you should improvising on the protagonists image. There are few grammatical errors that need to corrected, and I ...

Hi, I think you're plot's great, it's remarkably unique. All though I feel that the prologue could have been a bit longer. Try to give the background a more picturesque ...

Heyy, I really like this. This could be a short part of something great, if you're planning to extend it. There's a lot of thought and effort put into it, ...

Heyy, This is really nice, it reminds of the quote 'Change is inevitable, but it's for you to decide, where you want it to take you'. The story's sweet, simple ...

Heyy, The idea of the this content, is really unique. It's a nice effort. :) There are a few minor errors, I think in the line, 'You wish you had ...

Heyy, This is a good effort. :) But I really think you should try re-framing it. It would come out better if you avoid mentioning those movement of the protagonist ...

Heyy, I like how this poem changes it's story, it's nice. :) Though I think you should re-write a few lines just to make it better. The protagonist of the ...

Heyy, I think you should need some work in the introductory, though I like the idea of the whole depression story. But you should avoid all those ellipsis, many relate ...

Heyy, I really like you're writing style, it really helps portray the poem beautifully. :) There are few grammatical mistakes, try correcting those. You should consider re-writing a few lines, ...