DreamWork

Hi Monsters,here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,I think you should label this poem as 16+,not for everyone.The reason is, you using too much words ...

Hi HomeschooledTeen,here is Dark to give review on your poem. I really like the way you ask questions 'repeated' in every stanzas here in you makes the reader think and ...

Hi,ChangeTheWorld.Have a good day,here is Dark to give review on you poem. First of all,I really like how you describe 'what he thinks about you' through these lines; " He ...

Hi GriffinClaw,what a short two lines of poem here!I mean this is amazing.Just two lines but enough to make me stunned and amazed! #I know I shouldn't get my hopes ...

Hi there,BaronFlame.Have a good day,so here is Dark to give review on your fantastic poem! Honestly, I like your writing style that looks strong and attractive. Your own imagination makes ...

Hi ImHero,here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,this is such a nice poem to is kind of 'dark' when you use some words like death,etc.Also ...

Hi Malachi,here is Dark to give review on your wonderful poem. I really like your piece of imagination here to describe how beautiful is sunset is.Diction chosen by you is ...

Hi dominusatramentum,here is Dark to review your poem :D First of all,I love the point you want to show up is all ever happened to me too,and I think you ...

Hi MysteryMe,here is Dark to give review on your wonderful-longest poem :D I like the theme you want to point up ,and I think this is a very wonderful poem ...

Hi Frances,here is Dark to make review on your poem. First of all,I think I know what you are trying to convey here in your poem.But there are some lines ...

Hi there SolitaryCanary,here is Dark to give a review on your poem. I like the tone of the poem that brings a difference in your poem.Diction is strong and well-writen ...

Hi Liaya,here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,I love how you give the character of the mists here.What I understand about your poem is a ...

Hi there arianaSarroyo,here is Dark to give review on your sweet poem. Well,you doing a great job here.You still choose a theme that is concerned at "the main content" or ...

Hi ImHero,here is Dark to give review on your poem. First of all,I like the way you use the literature styles here. e.g;Clichés(A metaphor or simile that has become so ...

Hi there,BaronFlame.Here is Dark to review your poem. First of all,I agree with the others reviews here.You should use punctuation here to make the rhythm move smoothly and properly.You already ...