This poem is one of those poems where you go WOW! You think this because one, it is short and two, it has such a big message. The title brings in readers really well and the poem over all, is great. You could have a description on what this could be about. As in many poems, this could be a great start to a novel or a short story or even a longer and more descriptive poem. I would really love to know more about the character that you have here. That would be great. Here is an idea for you, the person that is here in this story, is being paid to have experiments done on her, so that she can provide for her family. She really wants to fit in but she is really poor and in debt. When they finish with her she has grown wings and is more of a freak in society. That would be a story that I would read. Overall, this poem speaks to me. Keep up the good work!
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