Dracula

Hello and Happy Review Day!! Your first paragraph is a little bit too large. Especially when compared to the others. You could split the paragraph somewhere between these sentences: I ...

Hello, mephistophelesangel (that was a lot to type) and Happy Review Day! :D From atop the Southern Castle’s roof, Viska looked on at a boy. You wrote 'a' boy, but ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! I'll go through any nitpicks I find first, then I'll get to the good parts. :) I was supposed to be her shield, and yet ...

Hello, Sunflowerr! Happy Review Day! Wow. So much happened in the first paragraph. You introduced the story well, but I was so surprised when I realised that the main characters ...

Hello, Teddybear22! I'm here to review. I haven't read the other chapters so I'll just look for nitpicks. :) "Ah yes, that may be true, but they are not you," ...

Hello! Happy Valentine's Day! If it still is, of course, it's the day after for me. :D Before consciousness would even consider returning to him, he vomited. It was reflex, ...

...Caught in a landslide, no escape from reality. Open your eyes, look up to the skies and see, I'm just a poor boy, I need no sympathy. Because I'm easy ...

Hello Bobster! Welcome welcome welcome to the Young Writers Society! I'm excited to review your first work on here. :D It was my first day of high school and I ...

Hello! I'm to review this amazing poem, because it's amazing. :p Death comes not at the edge of a sword, nor a spear's pointy tip or a bullet fast. Death ...

Nice poem! I really like the idea of 'you being you' and you've written it well. Although, for the first two thirds I felt like the poem's main focus was ...

Yes, you should continue! You should always continue, even if you leave it and then come back to it in a year. I think this is a very interesting story. ...

Fish are friends, not food! I instantly like this poem because it's completely relatable. I find myself unable to eat fish because of the way they are presented, hardly anything ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! This is a short poem so I'll write a quick little review for you, which hopefully will help you in some way. :) I notice ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! This will be a short review, sorry! I'm actually extremely hungry and should go have breakfast, but I want to keep helping my team. Anyway, ...

Hello and Happy Review Day!! I don't think I've read any other parts of your story so I'll just look for nitpicks, I won't be able to comment on character ...