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Re: Chapter 1.3 (Unknown Title)
Ooh, yay! Another half-chapter. Wait, third-chapter? :p Okay, you know that I love your writing and this story. So I'm not going to focus on telling you that, this time ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Summer
Greetings, The Small Princess. Is my French correct? I'm trying to learn. :P Honestly though, I am. I left without goodbye. High five! You started with an interesting, I-wanna-find-out-what-this-is-al
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: To make them feel
Hey there, PancakeandWaffle. Your username makes me feel really hungry. :p I'm one of those people who actually pays attention to what category works are put in and whether they're ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: The other two
Greetings to you, Spartan118! This will be a short review because I see that most things I was going to point out have already been mentioned by the two other ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: Return of Such Tracks!-Chapter 7
Hey there, MrMuddyPig! I remember reading the previous chapters of this story, so it was nice to see that you've updated! Sorry if this ends up being a really short ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Paper Portrait
If she felt lonely, she could write a world for herself where loneliness was void. If she wanted adventure and new beginnings, she could pen a story about a girl ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: a
Hey there, ShadowofDoubt! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! :D By that I mean, I can live each day delaying some things for another time. I'm not sure that 'some' ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 3, Dinner
Hey there, tswizzy22. :) “I really don’t,” Father said looking perplexed. There were a couple times where you forgot some vital punctuation. In that first sentence, you need a comma ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1.2 (Unknown Title)
Thanks for tagging me, Arouet! “Let her go or I’ll shoot you.” She managed to say. In my mind, Alex slightly stammered as she said this. She spoke with authority, ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1.1 (Unknown Title)
Coming straight from the prologue, I can say that I like the transition between the two. You go from a woman being murdered in cold blood to 'India is a ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: Prologue to 'Unknown Title'
Hey there! I'm about to read chapter 1.1 in the Green Room, but I thought it'd be a good idea to read this first. So my review won't be that ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: Death Mage Chapter One
Hey there, LadyEvvy! I'm here to review as part of National Reviewing Month. :D Creepy old basements were not Kou’s favorite part of the job. Before I started reading this ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: I lost someone I never belonged to in the first place
How does one even begin to review this? 0_o I can imagine this short piece being accompanied with a grand, colourful (and equally dark) painting of some kind. The poem ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: for lilly
Hey there, gracevan! Lilly is really lucky to have you as a sister; this is such a sweet, meaningful poem which really gets all your emotions to the surface. Your ...
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: love is beautiful like the setting sun
Hey there, spectator! I'm here to review your poem. :) The first thing that catches my eye is oftenly . I don't know if you did this on purpose (in ...
Sep 2, 2016
