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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1.3 (Unknown Title)

    Ooh, yay! Another half-chapter. Wait, third-chapter? :p Okay, you know that I love your writing and this story. So I'm not going to focus on telling you that, this time ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Summer

    Greetings, The Small Princess. Is my French correct? I'm trying to learn. :P Honestly though, I am. I left without goodbye. High five! You started with an interesting, I-wanna-find-out-what-this-is-al

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: To make them feel

    Hey there, PancakeandWaffle. Your username makes me feel really hungry. :p I'm one of those people who actually pays attention to what category works are put in and whether they're ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: The other two

    Greetings to you, Spartan118! This will be a short review because I see that most things I was going to point out have already been mentioned by the two other ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Culture Re: Return of Such Tracks!-Chapter 7

    Hey there, MrMuddyPig! I remember reading the previous chapters of this story, so it was nice to see that you've updated! Sorry if this ends up being a really short ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Paper Portrait

    If she felt lonely, she could write a world for herself where loneliness was void. If she wanted adventure and new beginnings, she could pen a story about a girl ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: a

    Hey there, ShadowofDoubt! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! :D By that I mean, I can live each day delaying some things for another time. I'm not sure that 'some' ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 3, Dinner

    Hey there, tswizzy22. :) “I really don’t,” Father said looking perplexed. There were a couple times where you forgot some vital punctuation. In that first sentence, you need a comma ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1.2 (Unknown Title)

    Thanks for tagging me, Arouet! “Let her go or I’ll shoot you.” She managed to say. In my mind, Alex slightly stammered as she said this. She spoke with authority, ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1.1 (Unknown Title)

    Coming straight from the prologue, I can say that I like the transition between the two. You go from a woman being murdered in cold blood to 'India is a ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Prologue to 'Unknown Title'

    Hey there! I'm about to read chapter 1.1 in the Green Room, but I thought it'd be a good idea to read this first. So my review won't be that ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death Mage Chapter One

    Hey there, LadyEvvy! I'm here to review as part of National Reviewing Month. :D Creepy old basements were not Kou’s favorite part of the job. Before I started reading this ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I lost someone I never belonged to in the first place

    How does one even begin to review this? 0_o I can imagine this short piece being accompanied with a grand, colourful (and equally dark) painting of some kind. The poem ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: for lilly

    Hey there, gracevan! Lilly is really lucky to have you as a sister; this is such a sweet, meaningful poem which really gets all your emotions to the surface. Your ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: love is beautiful like the setting sun

    Hey there, spectator! I'm here to review your poem. :) The first thing that catches my eye is oftenly . I don't know if you did this on purpose (in ...

    Sep 2, 2016


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