Demeter

Hey Fortis! I don't think I've ever reviewed something by you, or have I? :D The first thing that jumps out is the third stanza - did you mean it ...

Hi Usher! I think this is a really lovely poem. You use some beautiful imagery and I like how you made something so written-about as the moon sound somehow new ...

Hey Shine! You were hoping to get reviews on this again, so here I am. :D You have a really interesting rhyme scheme in this. At some points, it feels ...

Hey WritingWolf! What a cute little poem! I really liked “Little Red Writing Hood”, and it matches nicely with the review team as well! I also liked the idea of ...

Hi Verser! I was very interested to read this after I saw the description; I think you've got a really nice fascinating idea here. In fact, I think you could ...

Hi Wriskypump! I really enjoyed this poem. I haven't read your other poetry, but this definitely makes me want to give it a try. Do you do more of this ...

Hey Messenger! Well this is interesting! I'm not sure what particular place you might be talking about, if not the whole world... I like the way this looks on the ...

Hi shoaib! It's been a while! I think you've got a great start here. I thought the topic of the poem was nice (can you say that?), and even though ...

Hi Dianneece! :D The title and the description were so interesting, I just had to click on it! I'll quote a few bits and say what I think of them, ...

Hi Converse! Ooooh, another haiku! I just read one before this - it feels like Christmas, I like haiku so much! A couple of nitpicks that might not be so ...

Hi Timmy! :D Haiku are actually usually 5-7-5 (syllables) and this is 7-10-4, so this could be a haiku's second cousin. ;) Haiku (haikus?) are very fascinating, and I especially ...

Hi there Conor! I see it's your first day on YWS - welcome! :D I like the concise nature of this poem. Sometimes (actually most of the time) the best ...

Hello Sophie! And welcome to YWS! :) I think you've got an important idea here, although I'm not quite sure where you want to go with this and what makes ...

Hi there! Well, it's a bit scary starting to write this review considering what this poem is about. ;) I like the idea of needlework, and I think you keep ...

Hi there, tteele! And welcome to YWS! Apparently these are all separate poem sketches, no connection between them? That was a nice idea to post them all and sort of ...