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Re: Don't go
Hello there! Delirium here to give you a review. I just want to stop for a moment and say wow, this hit home harder than I thought. In my early ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Cassandra
Good morning, Delirium here to give you a review! So, I'd like to start off by saying this piece touched me in a very deep place, one of which brings ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: I Remember
Good morning! Delirium here to give you a review! Just for starters, I love the idea behind this. The idea of young love and the way in which it spurs ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: Surrender
Good morning! Delirium here to give you a review! I's like to start off by saying, wow. This piece is stunning. When I see short, formatted pieces with such structure ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: I Know There Is One
Hey there, Delirium here to give you a review! Might I start off by saying that this piece really surprised me. I hesitated before clicking when I noticed the spiritual ...
Feb 27, 2015 -
Re: I don't know how to begin
Hey there! Delirium here to give you a review! I have to admit, I scrolled past this a few times before actually clicking. I was a bit hesitant to open ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: I wish I could tell you
Hey there! Delirium here to give you a review! I agree with farahmasud. This piece would make a fantastic song with a little bit of repetition. Anywho, I enjoyed this ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Black and white
Hi there! Delirium here to give you a review! I really enjoyed the concept of this poem, and loved where you drew your inspiration from. Many believe that a picture ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Houses that haunt me
Hey there! Delirium here to give you a review! This is a very interesting poem. Before I even clicked on it, the title had me intrigued. However, by the end ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: Breathing.
Hi there! Delirium here to give you a review! I had to read this multiple times to fully grasp my feelings about it. And after several scans, I've decided that ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: I loathe you.
Hey there! Delirium here to give you a review! First of all, wow. This is so different from, most poems that are seen today. So many focus on the romantic ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: My Father, the Inventor
Hey there, Delirium here to give you a review! First of all, I'd like to say excellent job. I love the whole metaphor and how you use the idea of ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Fragile surrender
Hey there, Delirium here to give a review! First of all, wow. This poem is really intriguing and different. I found it interesting how you used the roman numerals to ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Silence
It's nice to finally meet someone who appreciates the solemnity of cemeteries as much as I do. First off, I would like to say that I enjoyed this piece very ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: Ashes
This is breathtaking. The simplicity and elegance, the power of the words leave you hungering for more. The phone rings. I pick up. A single voice, One I know well. ...
Mar 4, 2014
