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Delirium

Delirium

  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Don't go

    Hello there! Delirium here to give you a review. I just want to stop for a moment and say wow, this hit home harder than I thought. In my early ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Lyrical Re: Cassandra

    Good morning, Delirium here to give you a review! So, I'd like to start off by saying this piece touched me in a very deep place, one of which brings ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Other » General, Romantic Re: I Remember

    Good morning! Delirium here to give you a review! Just for starters, I love the idea behind this. The idea of young love and the way in which it spurs ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Surrender

    Good morning! Delirium here to give you a review! I's like to start off by saying, wow. This piece is stunning. When I see short, formatted pieces with such structure ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: I Know There Is One

    Hey there, Delirium here to give you a review! Might I start off by saying that this piece really surprised me. I hesitated before clicking when I noticed the spiritual ...

    Feb 27, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: I don't know how to begin

    Hey there! Delirium here to give you a review! I have to admit, I scrolled past this a few times before actually clicking. I was a bit hesitant to open ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I wish I could tell you

    Hey there! Delirium here to give you a review! I agree with farahmasud. This piece would make a fantastic song with a little bit of repetition. Anywho, I enjoyed this ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Hi there! Delirium here to give you a review! I really enjoyed the concept of this poem, and loved where you drew your inspiration from. Many believe that a picture ...

    Nov 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Houses that haunt me

    Hey there! Delirium here to give you a review! This is a very interesting poem. Before I even clicked on it, the title had me intrigued. However, by the end ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Breathing.

    Hi there! Delirium here to give you a review! I had to read this multiple times to fully grasp my feelings about it. And after several scans, I've decided that ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: I loathe you.

    Hey there! Delirium here to give you a review! First of all, wow. This is so different from, most poems that are seen today. So many focus on the romantic ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Technology, Dramatic Re: My Father, the Inventor

    Hey there, Delirium here to give you a review! First of all, I'd like to say excellent job. I love the whole metaphor and how you use the idea of ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fragile surrender

    Hey there, Delirium here to give a review! First of all, wow. This poem is really intriguing and different. I found it interesting how you used the roman numerals to ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Silence

    It's nice to finally meet someone who appreciates the solemnity of cemeteries as much as I do. First off, I would like to say that I enjoyed this piece very ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ashes

    This is breathtaking. The simplicity and elegance, the power of the words leave you hungering for more. The phone rings. I pick up. A single voice, One I know well. ...

    Mar 4, 2014


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