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Re: Synchronicity: Meaningful Coincidence
Deadman here with a review for you. Just a quick warning, I'm not feeling the best so I apologize if I miss something. I jumped in and your first impression ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: I Want
Deadman here with a review for you today. This poem isn't bad at all. It's short sweet and to the point. You've got a nice concept going here. I actually ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Falling Up
Deadman here with a review for you today. This is your first poem? I wouldn't have ever been able to guess. My first poem is so miserable it's not even ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Haiku
Deadman here with a review for you! Interesting Haiku, I should hope it is about food. I agree with Serene, if I hadn't read the little description I would be ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Click
Deadman here with a review for you today! I'll be honest when I say that I wasn't not expecting this when I saw the title. However, upon reading there was ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Bruises
Deadman here with a review. Ooof, I'm tired so excuse me if a make a few mistakes while reviewing or perhaps miss something. Bruises, that's interesting, most people use scars ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: I Survived
Deadman here with a review for you. I'm blown away at this poem. I simply loved the whole thing, and everything about it! Nice format, splendid flow, and plenty of ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: And for that I love you.
Hey, your pal Deadman is here to give you a quick review. Well I can see the emotion in this poem, and I related to it, perhaps a little too ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: you're all i need
Deadman here with a review for you! First off, I'd like to say that this is a great poem. Next, I've been expecting poems like this all day. :) This ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: Smoldering
Deadman here with a review for you! I'd like to start off with saying, that I clicked on this because the title caught my eye. When I started reading, you ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: To love.
Deadman here, and guess what? I've got a review for you! (haha, yeah not as creative as I'd hoped...) Okay yeah I suck at entrances, but let's focus on this ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: Jim
Deadman here with a review for you today. Nice, story indeed. I haven't read anything about a caterpillar in ages! This is very interesting, and has a cool twist at ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: Adrien In The Poppy Field
Deadman here with a review for you today. Short, but very concise. You started to get dramatic too. Since I know that's what you are looking for I'll start with ...
Feb 14, 2014 -
Re: I'll show him
Deadman here with a review for you today. Bare with me, my shift key is broken so prepare for mistakes on my part. I'd like to say welcome to YWS, ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: Renewed in White
Deadman here with a review for you! Beautiful, just beautiful! I love the poem, and it's quite an interesting topic. I mean mot people look at spring for rebirth, not ...
Feb 13, 2014
