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  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: Synchronicity: Meaningful Coincidence

    Deadman here with a review for you. Just a quick warning, I'm not feeling the best so I apologize if I miss something. I jumped in and your first impression ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: I Want

    Deadman here with a review for you today. This poem isn't bad at all. It's short sweet and to the point. You've got a nice concept going here. I actually ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Falling Up

    Deadman here with a review for you today. This is your first poem? I wouldn't have ever been able to guess. My first poem is so miserable it's not even ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    Deadman here with a review for you! Interesting Haiku, I should hope it is about food. I agree with Serene, if I hadn't read the little description I would be ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Click

    Deadman here with a review for you today! I'll be honest when I say that I wasn't not expecting this when I saw the title. However, upon reading there was ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Bruises

    Deadman here with a review. Ooof, I'm tired so excuse me if a make a few mistakes while reviewing or perhaps miss something. Bruises, that's interesting, most people use scars ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Survived

    Deadman here with a review for you. I'm blown away at this poem. I simply loved the whole thing, and everything about it! Nice format, splendid flow, and plenty of ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: And for that I love you.

    Hey, your pal Deadman is here to give you a quick review. Well I can see the emotion in this poem, and I related to it, perhaps a little too ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you're all i need

    Deadman here with a review for you! First off, I'd like to say that this is a great poem. Next, I've been expecting poems like this all day. :) This ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Smoldering

    Deadman here with a review for you! I'd like to start off with saying, that I clicked on this because the title caught my eye. When I started reading, you ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: To love.

    Deadman here, and guess what? I've got a review for you! (haha, yeah not as creative as I'd hoped...) Okay yeah I suck at entrances, but let's focus on this ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Jim

    Deadman here with a review for you today. Nice, story indeed. I haven't read anything about a caterpillar in ages! This is very interesting, and has a cool twist at ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Adrien In The Poppy Field

    Deadman here with a review for you today. Short, but very concise. You started to get dramatic too. Since I know that's what you are looking for I'll start with ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: I'll show him

    Deadman here with a review for you today. Bare with me, my shift key is broken so prepare for mistakes on my part. I'd like to say welcome to YWS, ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Renewed in White

    Deadman here with a review for you! Beautiful, just beautiful! I love the poem, and it's quite an interesting topic. I mean mot people look at spring for rebirth, not ...

    Feb 13, 2014


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