ConverseFireGirl

Wow, this is AMAZING. I can bet you, like, £10 this will be on the Spotlight. I love your rhythm. It's absolutely spot on, and the lines are great, short, ...

Trust me, this is the perfect length. The lines were perfectly written and your syllables are great. My favourite line was your final one, it ended the poem great, and ...

Hello yet again, my friend, Laure! :D I am on a reviewing spree you see to beat TakeThatYouFiend in a competition and I congratulate you on being the person that ...

This was amazing!! I literally could not stop reading once I had started, and I think it's great. You have got the characteristic just right is Music were a person, ...

Wow, this is an actually amazing piece of work, by the first few lines I had already liked it, and I think I'll follow you too, it's that good! My ...

This is a very nice poem, your flow for me was perfect. Your first lines are very well done, and I just think that your syllables are great. "Put on ...

Wow, this is strong. Seriously. Very powerful. I enjoyed how you wrote this a lot, short lines with a lot of meaning which I suppose links to the poem quite ...

Wow, this was both deep, powerful, and mysterious. Veeery nice mix there. I found this a good poem, with a lot of meaning behind it. There's one thing I'd suggest ...

This was a very powerful poem indeed. I like the points that you make, and give a positive spin to them in places, which really give the reader some sense ...

Wow, this has earned you a follow from me! :O Amazing piece of work, you had emotion behind it and it was just fabulously written. The way you added speech ...

Wow, this was a very mysterious piece! I was immediately drawn into it by your first few sentences , even words. The psychologist talking to her makes the reader want ...

This was a very good piece of writing. I personally,a s the reader was drawn in by the first few words, a skill, not many posses! Your lines breaks are ...

Wow, this is amazing! I love it! I personally write best at night as well, and I think that you've proved that you do too! :D My favourite lines were ...

This is a very intriguing piece indeed. You have made a story, so I congratulate you! When he grabbed that person's arm i got a bit worried, I admit which ...

This was powerful. VERY powerful. I like it. Your wording is perfect, I particularly liked the lines: "She was as frail as a snowflake And light as a feather. She ...