ConverseFireGirl

This is a god piece of writing, good job. As I was just popping in to help out with the Green Room high-alert, I haven't had time to read the ...

Wow. I didn't think the story would take that twist at all! It's an intriguing story here and makes the reader want to know exactly where it's going. I'd suggest ...

Whoa... this is a really good poem. And how you wrote it last night too! That takes skill, when I write a poem, it takes ages to edit and this ...

I think this is a great poem! :D You've done a great job here of spacing it out, leaving pauses in just the right places and wording it marvelously! As ...

This is really good! I especially like your last line too, it really makes the reader take a step back and think "Whoaa" Your writing is good, grammar is good. ...

Wow, this is a really, really good piece of writing, good job! I have to say, that I think it's a good thing you posted it all together as A.) ...

Veeery nicely done indeed. I like it! This does make a lot of sense too! Your descriptions are well done and we can understand what you mean. I'd suggest breaking ...

Whoa... This is a very, very interesting piece of writing indeed. By reading this, and your experiences, it really does jolt us a little bit to just how real everything ...

Wow, this is an awesome piece of work. I like they way you have written this, and made the reader think and relate to your ideas and the poem itself! ...

Wow, this is great. I love it! I really like your length too, it's not too long or too short, as I totally get your meaning here. I really like ...

Wow, this is a really really good idea! I love how you left the story open until the end, when you just dropped it on us that it was a... ...

This is really really good. It makes the reader think a lot about what money actually is to THEM. I love how you've done it too, making it thought provoking ...

Heh, this is a good idea. I can see what you've done here. Maybe you could possibly improve it by with the last sentence change from "Once upon a 5th ...

WOW. This is fabulous! Firstly, I love your rhyming, I can't rhyme for anything. Seriously. You've made it seem really well done here, and it flows just right. I love ...

This is a good poem. You've put a lot of effort into it, and it sounds great. I'm pretty bad at reviewing poetry, but I'll give it a shot :) ...