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Hey, This is a great story. I love your use of vocabulary I agree with crissmarx in the idea that it helps grab a readers attention. You also have a ...

Hey, You know my view on depression so thank you for writing this. Also thank you for supporting me while I was freaking out. It means a lot to me. ...

Hey, I think this is great! I'm so excited to read more... you are writing more right? Please don't decide to stop! You used really nice descriptive words that I ...

Hey, For being a short poem this is pretty great! You have a nice use of punctuation and capitalization which help convey the message nicely. I also appreciate your use ...

Hey, These lyrics are amazing. My only little nitpicks however focus mainly around on the lack of punctuation. Punctuation helps a lot of things come together and it helps convey ...

Hey, This is a great poem. You used punctuation correctly which is always nice. I also admire your use of vocab through out the entire poem. Because this is a ...

Hey, Amazing poem! You have a beautiful idea being depicted here and I love it. I can tell this came from something truly beautiful within you. My one little nitpick ...

Hey, This is a good poem, it really is. I appreciate your use of punctuation it helped your story come alive, at least to me. However, I get the feeling ...

Hey, This is a great poem. I can relate to it completely. I love your use of punctuation as well, thank you for not forgetting it! I love the dark ...

Hey, Your mother is in my prayers. I really hope she manages to pull through. Im honestly not entirely sure what else to say. I have written your mother a ...

Hey, Thus a interesting story is born! This is a great story. I'm surprised to see in sitting in the green room for so long. First off really nice use ...

Hey, This is a great poem. My only little nitpicks however are probably the lack of punctuation. For me it tends to kinda kill the poem in a way. Aside ...

Hey, Thank you so much for this. I've been struggling with depression for years, and had to be put in the psych ward for ten days in the summer. The ...

Hey, This is a great poem, but sadly I must talk to you as a reviewer not a friend *sigh*. Anyway, nice use of punctuation it really helped pull your ...

Hey, This is a really great poem. I have a few corrections however. In the first line of your poem the word stop should be capitalized as it is the ...