Prayers

Hello, AaricaRae! First of all, I would like to say it's fine that you have been like is, just make sure you make up for it. I hope your mom will be okay...it's important that in crises like these in life, you have to be strong. Breaking down during this won't help your mom or you. So on a word of courage, stay proud! And, I definitely will send a prayer up to Him, even if I don't know your mom. Hope she's all right!

So, even though this is a bit silly, let's get on with the review. In this paragraph, I don't think you need a space after the ellipsis. I think it looks a lot better if you don't put one there, but I'll let you go if you do. The second opening sentence was very sweet, and I love it, but "sending" doesn't work where it is. "Send" does.

"When she went to the doctor, they said her white blood cell count was very high... which is a sign of leukemia.

I love my mom, more than I can even put in words, and I really need help in this. I feel like a bunch of prayers would be of much help. If you guys don't mind, just sending up a quick prayer to our God, it would mean the world to me!"

That was all I had to say. It is definitely alright if you don't fix these nitpicks, since you're going throught a hard time, but I will pray for your mom. Just know that.

-wisegirl22

I will definitely pray for your mother and you and your family.

Hey,

Your mother is in my prayers. I really hope she manages to pull through. Im honestly not entirely sure what else to say. I have written your mother a poem, I'll pm it to you later. I hope you remember however that everyone causes people stress at some point and I know you didn't give your mother cancer. It does take bravery to admit that you were causing them stress however. I know how much it hurts to break your parrents hearts and not really care until later, I went through something similar when I was put in the psych ward. I really hope your mom is okay tho. I lost my brother so I can relate to this feeling of worry. Im here for you. 24/7 (I dont have much of a life) just shoot me a pm.
love,
Collideascope

Aarica,

I will pray for your mother, and for you. You really seem like you need it.

P.S. You have also earned a follow!

I know this is a solemn time. I understand. My aunt has cancer. I was so scared. I know how it feels. I am so sorry, I will pray.

~Tiff

Aarica,

I will pray for your mother, and for you. You really seem like you need it.

P.S. You have also earned a follow!

I know this is a solemn time. I understand. My aunt has cancer. I was so scared. I know how it feels. I am so sorry, I will pray.

Also, we all do things we regret. Don't feel bad for that. Again, though, I can't tell you just how much I feel for you. I am sorry for so much of your emotional loss and mental, too. It must keep you up at night. As said before, I will pray. I will pray extra hard with all my might. I wish the best to you and your family!

~Tiff

Hey there,

I'm sorry about your mother and you should not break like this.
we all are like you. you know, like, putting our parents into difficult situations even though we love them hard.

and about Leukemia, there are many methods available to treat acute and chronic leukemia. They include chemotherapy, biological therapy, or stem cell transplantation. so, you don't worry.

and, as much it's about praying, I'll of course pray for her. we all love our mothers, yes, they scream on us for silly matters but that reflects their love, don't they?

Your mother would be proud that her daughter is concerned this much for her! Don't worry dear, everything's gonna be fine. just have faith in the Almighty.

Good luck and god bless you. stay strong!